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It was too much, just stating them as a passing thought would have been much better than all this embellishment.

I would like to see how he will be different from the protagonists or villains, cause he seems to be the same, I'm not seeing anything unique in his character and approach. He has a system, he won't let anyone step over him, it seems that he will kill them due to the stealing life essence and to get rid of future hindrances. Pretty normal...

Something that I like about this novel is how it skips useless fights and continues the story, it gives a bigger impression to what is done in a few lines instead of some dragged out chapters about some random characters.

Man, you can't tell me that you are some god in this game and now say how careless were you, more so with something pertaining your skills. You were one of the only eight people to attain that level out of I don't know millions? (don't know how popular it was). It would have been better to just say that he didn't care cause he is confident that no one can do anything to him or some bs like that.

This looks dangerous

Good info dump, neat and short

Hopefully he loses again, so this can make any sense

All that talk for it to end up being solved with plot armor

Please, the pronouns

Thanks for this chapter, best chapter so far. Thanks for the improvement in grammar too.

Well, I would say that there's not enough build up for whatever transpired here, him thinking about saving the world while being beaten up doesn't make any sense. We haven't seen that kind of purpose in him, he is selfish and that's ok for me. His power up was pretty lame, I thought that he had this kind of abilities since a long time ago, or what was that previous training for?

This is so dumb

It's such a great development, in other novels the so called experts are treated as retards, you are trying to deceive or play mysterious with someone that has lived over a century and is powerful in an environment where anyone can die at anytime

But he doesn't know that, so even if it can't be done, there's no reason for him not to say it

This is a bit bizarre, you're telling me that he is that composed facing Amelia? The one who tortured you, who threatened you with killing you and Ash, who almost killed her if not for Ria, and in almost every interaction with her she treated you and Ash as tools. I understand that while trying to save Ash he wouldn't care for the sake of it, but later, with how much he overthinks about everything, and with how he was feeling that Irene was a stranger cause she didn't want to save Ash, it just doesn't add up. The Mc is talking without having second thoughts, everything is being glossed over for the sake of the story, and she will come to visit from time to time...

So annoying, this thing were they almost talked about the important topic that is the game, but obviously didn't happen and now it's back to square one or even worse with the heroine. It would have been better without all that nonsense and the Mc just waking up recovered.