Sabes me estaba preguntando ya que lograste en esta historia que naruto dejara de obsesionarse con sakura por qué no haces que diga algunos amagos hacia ino y hinata incluso a yakumo kurama que siendo honestos tanto en konoha como en varias partes de las naciones elementales hay chicas que están interesadas o que terminan enamorándose del uzumaki pero este siempre está con sus dos grandes obsesiones que lo atan sakura y sasuke irónicamente ellos son las grandes cadenas que lo reprime te tanto emocional como en su potencial por eso te digo que consideres a esas chicas que mencione al principio para comenzar su harem que opinas You know, I was wondering, since you managed to get Naruto to stop obsessing with Sakura in this story, why don't you make him say some threats towards Ino and Hinata, even Yakumo Kurama, who, to be honest, both in Konoha and in various parts of the elemental nations, there are girls who They are interested or end up falling in love with Uzumaki but he is always with his two great obsessions that bind him, Sakura and Sasuke, ironically, they are the great chains that bind him. It represses him both emotionally and in his potential, that's why I tell you to consider those girls that I mentioned at the beginning to start his harem, what do you think?
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Una pregunta esta es una historia original o es una traducción por que si es una historia original tengo algunas sugerencias como por ejemplo aquí podrías hacer que issei no se vuelva demonio si no que se quede como un humano dragón además de que convenza a Irina de que se quede a su lado y no se vuelva un ángel además de que también y digo esto solo como sugerencia agregues a miki hyoundo pero eso lo sugiero por el tema tanto de darle poder para que se cuide como para agregar material H para lemon que opinas One question, is this an original story or is it a translation because if it is an original story I have some suggestions, such as here you could make Issei not become a demon but instead stay as a human dragon in addition to convincing Irina that Stay by his side and don't become an angel. Also, and I say this only as a suggestion, add Miki Hyoundo, but I suggest that because of the issue of both giving him power to take care of himself and adding H material for Lemon, what do you think?
If I can give you a suggestion, you should go first for Chloe and Kagami, both of whom have wealthy families that could help you put together the resources you need or for future plans. In addition, their emotional situations put them in a fragile state that allows you to mold them into better versions than in canon giving you future allies with or without their miraculus, what do you think?
Ask in this story, can you expect that the girls with whom Asta interacts in the canon will be interested in him and be part of his harem or will you add oc girls or girls from other series because if so I recommend this one, it's called Fremy Speeddraw of the serie rokka no yuusha in addition to another alternative that would be that you make Asta learn senjutsu since that is based on natural energy and not the magic that you think
A question since you made cid become friends with yukikaze means that when shiranui appears you will try to make her the shadow puppet because that would be a route to take while you create shadow garden
Una pregunta y si agregas otros personajes por ejemplo de ajisai no chiru koro natsuha shinomiya y también de este H que te recomiendo se los ma jinrui haiboku monogatary ahí puedes usarlo como una misión especial de salvar a esas protagonistas pero que como efecto especial obtengan sus formas de monstruos y las puedan controlar y cambiar a voluntad que opinas A question and if you add other characters for example of ajisai no chiru koro natsuha shinomiya and also of this H that I recommend the ma jinrui haiboku monogatary there you can use it as a special mission to save those protagonists but that as a special effect they get their forms of monsters and can control them and change them at will what do you think?
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What about Princess Knight Catue You can do that during the mission where he is, catue is happening and they share a moment where she falls in love with him and so when her canon event happens, instead of going straight to her castle, she seeks help from Lihan. You can also do Let Lihan learn a skill that uses the aura and amplifies his physical capabilities or maybe give him abilities like the protagonist of that Sevent light novel, you know the one where the protagonist uses an artifact that contains the convictions of his seven ancestors and they pass on their arts or innate abilities. You can search the wiki of the novel and see if those abilities are useful to you because I saw that they were both support and attack which can help a lot to give you what do you think
question, will they only use characters from ratata or could they also use characters from other stories, for example, they could make characters from ntr obedience come out, some say that this h looks like bad end party, you can make lucas's wife and daughter be saved, but lucas will save them. He hid and sacrificed himself so that they would be safe, but Lihan found them and promised to give them a home and protection. In addition, you can also use other kuroinu ajes and rpg luvias, what do you think?
with asia it would be to take advantage of her deagon tamer ability in addition to two other reasons that would be to train her to change her and for her to have a different personality which can also influence the breaker balance besides the last reason is to screw so much You would laugh like Isei, that's why I suggested Asia in addition to Akeno and Irina because in my opinion those girls were never able to develop more than what they should have in the canon. which is a waste
One question, if this is a rewrite of the previous version, does it mean that you will make several changes to it because if so, I'm looking forward to it in another note since you made a story giving Oscar the lead role instead of the usual thing, which would be to use Jaune or ruby otaught that in the future you could do a husttia using whitley to see how you get on developing the skills of the youngest of the schnne otthought you could make it more strategic or combine the glyphs with a fighting style that allows him to use a gun and sword like Nero from DMC(Devil May Cry) What do you think of the idea?
RWBY: Oscar the gamer
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