This is a good fanfic. I greatly enjoy reading the story. Great work author. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Well, thanks for the chapter.
The beginning of the fantic was good. However, as the story progress, it's quality gradually fell. Around chapter 200+, reading the story became boring. It might be because the author releases chapters too fast. Nevertheless, good work author. Having written a story with more than 200 chapters is something worthy of praise.
Overall, it's a pretty good fanfic. Though, it has quite a lot of grammar mistakes and sometimes used wrong words. Hope that the author improve. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXC
This is a really good pokemon fanfic. Continue to do your best, author. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Don't mind me, I just want to comment something I've read in the Type-moon wiki just recently. Apparently, Japanese (or Eastern?) Heroic Spirit can't be summoned in Fuyuki grail war, and only Western Heroic Spirit are allowed, due to some kind of restriction when the system was made. Sasaki's(Assassin) summoning was an anomaly in the system due to Caster being his summoner. Again, I'm not sure if this information is accurate. I've only read this from the wiki. Thanks for the chapter, author.
Thanks for the chapter. Author, your gamer fic is quite good. Hope it remains so.
This fanfic is great! 10/10 would recommend. Writing quality: 4.5/5 (Because, as the author mentioned, english is not perfect. There's some mistakes here and there. Nothing mayor that will affect reading.) Update stability: 5 (From what I've seen, there's at least one chapter a week.) Story development: 5 (Nothing to say(write), read is yourself. It's good.) Character design: 5 (I like the Mc's character. Also, the other characters follow their canon personality, other than being somewhat more 'realistic'.) World background: 5 (Personally, I found no glaring plot holes. I don't have much knowledge about Marvel.)
It's a good fanfic. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... I have nothing else to say(write).
This is quite a good fanfic. Specially due to originally being a Chinese fanfic, it seems to me that the author has a good understanding of Genshin Impact. However, one flaw I found after reading a couple of chapters is that the protagonist's name doesn't match the context. For example; after the protagonist introduce himself to Draff, Draff commented that names from Liyue is hard to pronounce. This is despite the protagonist having the name Nolan Walker. This made me realise that the protagonist's original name is different. So, I used the Chinese title to search the novel and learn that the protagonist is originally named 'Li Qiuzhi' (according to Google Translate). It would had been better to just keep the original name to match the context. Other than that, I enjoyed reading the fanfic. Thanks for translating this story, it certainly beat having to read the Google Translate one.
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