I think you’re misunderstanding the events. Let me clarify for you. She’s partially dead. All her actions are done by her subconscious. She isn’t capable of writing a message. She isn’t capable of making the zombies dance. She’s just following her ‘will’ of when she was alive. Everything about her was merely a fabrication of Julien’s memories. Regarding why the citizens didn’t ask for help. Do you notice how she’s 14 and capable of using magic when the empire rules state it’s forbidden? —Yes, the empire has them executed. They don’t ask help not because they don’t want to, but because in their eyes the empire is a tyrant. This should clear up all misunderstandings.
Her journey.
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
There will soon be an arc with her ;)
*Read before reading the novel* That's the first chapter of this novel. Please read that.
Because in this world body posession is a thing. It's really as simple as that.
So, if you read the last chapter, you will see that his vision grows dark without him knowing. [That's him closing his eyes.] He's just in so much pain that he thinks he has kept his eyes open and looking at the professor. That's not the case at all, hence why I showed a third person pov of what really happened.
His eyes were closed and so were his lips.
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
No, I totally understand you and appreciate your criticism, but if you notice, the comedy is mainly within the Academy, which is the (safe place) within this world. When it gets to the serious aspect of the story, you won't see much comedy.
I am writing a novel that will last 1.2k chapters. The structure has always been the same, with comedy and slice of life towards the end of each arc, and seriousness at the start. I've never changed the structure and if you've managed to reach this point you should be well attuned to the structure. The seriousness is always there, with more slice-of-life focused scene most recently because the novel was constantly getting criticized for not having enough breathers with constant action each time. Unfortunately, I cannot accommodate the vast minority who feel this way so if you don't like slice-of-life and comedy, you may skip to start of each arc where the tone will remain serious until the end
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
No, they haven’t been rewritten. The rewritten ones will be released on Amazon
Btw when I mean have them executed, I mean her parents. They got executed (hence why it’s just her and brother)
Her journey.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI