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2019-07-02 UnidoBrazil
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RenCmps
4 years ago
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The story is very good, its plot captivates us and catches our attention, arresting us. The author's writing is also something to stand out, very good.
This is the story of a boy who, despite his hard work, cannot be as good as his brother, considered a great prodigy, in martial arts, but the answer is clear, this is due to the fact that his skills are not being used in the right way, he must change his own style to follow his path.
Suffering because of other people's mistake, this sums up well the life of a young boy, but even with everything and everyone conspiring against him managed to survive.
Who would have imagined that someone who survived practically everything would die in such a normal way, one day when he was in another of his escapes was run over, instant death, but something had still been reserved for him, this was... a second chance.
He wakes up in a room, with the self titled trainee god, he has the choice to start over in a new world, full of magic and wonderful things, but that will also bring great dangers.
This is a story inspired by the Japanese isekais, our protagonist will live in a world of magic and dangerous monsters, will he manage to survive in this world just like he did in his old life? (Although he died).
English is not my mother tongue, I apologize for possible mistakes in the future.
Isekai according to Wikipedia: Isekai (異世界 lit. "different world") is a sub-genre of light novels, manga, animes and fantasy electronic games characterized by a normal protagonist (usually a contemporary inhabitant of the Earth) being transported or trapped in a parallel universe.
Bettergarden is an empire that formerly several races coexisted together, but the demons, led by Malyoranbharas Nemonnevry, declared war on the other races, attacking and dominating one by one. Nowadays this dimension, and some others, are completely dominated by them, but the one who led them to such triumph no longer has the same strength, their days of glory have passed, now they seek, through invocation, someone who can become the new lord of these lands, but what they didn't expect was a little baby with the necessary power for that.
The story is very good, its plot captivates us and catches our attention, arresting us. The author's writing is also something to stand out, very good.
Kalui
Fantasy · MarceloPedrette