A Masterpiece for the first novel this author created, it has been so many years since i read something with a writing and description top-notch, combined with a amazing history and protagonist. And the Author talks and comment everyone like he was truly happy for his work and feedback.
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Writing Quality: 4/5 It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue and descriptions are balanced, it could be better. Updating Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone Story Development: 4/5 Good plot, although it is more balanced betwen descriptions and dialogues, it could be better. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing. Character Design: 4/5 Not bad, I don't have much to say though. World Background: 5/5 Extremely detailed, doesn't live anything out on how the world is. Keep up the good work!
Pick up this book and read it. It's very good. Fair grammar, some mistakes but understandable. I really like the MC. He's got a good character. I hope the author doesn't make any crazy tweak on him. Good dialogues. Well done author.
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A great novel with good focus on the MC and good character building. Great paced with very little filler, although the're a few chapter released, the world building is amazing. it's one of the better cultivation stories I've read
The Arcane God
Fantasy · Kingficher