Daoist_Lake - Profile

Yes of course. I know ROB don't matter. She just give away the gift. but how about The Presence and another DC Cosmic Being? if they Omnipotent and Omniscience they know how dangerous MC to they masterplane.

So i can't leave bad rating and bad review? But i can leave 5 Rating and [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Emoji Review? nope. I do my review pure from my perspective. i don't care about author attention or comment, i just reply the respond from my review.

Of Course. Because This ROB have higher authority than The Presence.

And what Point your previous comment before this? just sarcastic remark? why you make it like i'am ignored your comment? i reply you.

So i must give Positive 5 Star Rating with Negative Review? Nope. It just make author happy. He can delete my review but my 5 Star Rating still counted by apps system. I just pointed whats wrong with plot hole in his story, and how confusion his Power Scale in DC Universe.

i just don't like story with Power-Giver ROB (Random Omni Being), Future Vision (Plot) and Slave System'. Many fanfic with 1 from 3 thing above in the first chapter has : 1. Unclear Power Scale, 2. Many Plot Hole in big scale, 3. Unclear Purpose, 4. Just for Show-off or Pick up Girl.

Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.

Really..... what meaning Yandere if there hase Harem Tag? hah....

Nah. What meaning be Yandere if there has Harem Tag? in the end, MC Will have many women. and Yandere girl forced learn to accept MC. Yandere in my word = One Side Love to MC, Sacrifice/Kill anything for MC, never accept MC to love many women,Egoist, Jealousy, Thirst for MC attention and has many depravity Personality just for Mc. if there has Harem Tag, its not Yandere. Its just Menhera, never close to Yandere. Menhera can be fixed by anyone, but Yandere is never be fixed by anyone include MC.