it's good to see this back it's by far one of my favorite fics
this one man its already super good
idk what tf this is but apparently some sort of weird language or whatever that is totally weird............ ................ ...............
I'm loving this fanfic it's the best g.o.t fic I've read please keep this going
dude I understand you gotta reach that rank but your gonna lose more readers as you keep pushing this in peoples faces
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should be harem and make a faction that allies with night raid that slowly becomes a underground empire
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overall the writing quality is pretty terrible and the grammar and word choice are all poorly placed and turned around aside from these points the story premise is interesting and if the writing quality improves or is redone then this could very well be an excellent read
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the grammar is way too bad now imma drop this and come back later to see if it improves
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