Emblemas 9
Moments 19
Shachin83
The storyline is really good makes me want to read more but grammar makes me want to stop reading. What do I do?
Este livro foi excluído.
Shachin83
u need a editor
Este livro foi excluído.
Shachin83
the story is really good
Este livro foi excluído.
Shachin83
or in creators's thoughts
Shachin83
u can add this last sorry parts in the comments u know
Shachin83
Ur book is really nice. The story is great but I think u need to do some editing
Shachin83
many many happy returns of the day author. .. .
Shachin83
we support u author till now I didn't give much comments but from now on I will comment as often as I could
Shachin83
author just tell us if u r going to give miji mass release or not
please author get an editor