TDSD_1

TDSD_1

male LV 2
2019-04-21 Unido Brazil
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TDSD_1
TDSD_1
10 hours ago
Commented

About the desire to always reincarnate as the protagonist of the world, is it basically that he completes his journey in a world, then lives the rest of that life, dies, leaves everything behind and goes to another and starts from scratch, with a new body (MC of the world that was)? Or does he finish the canon of the world and then go to another, take his loved ones (harem), maintaining the progress already made and the body he had, and only then gaining the 'halo' of the protagonist of that world?

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TDSD_1
12 days ago
Posted

This story has plot holes, the writing quality is average, there are certain things that were rushed, and others that are left without context, but it still had potential for growth. But for me the author killed the story, the MC (male) simply fainted and had a conversation with the god who reincarnated him, and during this conversation it is said that the MC's body is just a shell for his true self (limits his power), and simply says that the MC's inner (true) body is female. This is completely disappointing, I waited a few chapters to see if it wasn't a prank by the author (I've seen it happen before), but even though it was mentioned every chapter, nothing changed that. For me this is the end, I can't stand reading it anymore, I'm dropping it. I'm still going to TRY to give a fair review.

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TDSD_1
18 days ago
Commented

Does anyone know what world this is?

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TDSD_1
22 days ago
Commented

I see the Sun Dragonslayer spell as useless, since the Sun is a star, which makes it a weakened version of the Star Dragonslayer spell.

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TDSD_1
1 months ago
Commented

Sobre o interesse romantico já foi decidido?

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TDSD_1
2 months ago
Commented

The story so far isn't bad, but it's also not among the best so far (7/10), there's still a lack of action, it's very slow, there isn't anything that makes you want to wait for new chapters, until the At the moment I see it as just another story. The writing quality is good, an 8/10. But from my point of view (in my opinion the biggest negative point) there is a lot of useless content, you fill the chapters with a lot of details on how he makes the items, his theories behind it and the process of manufacturing. This becomes a filler, it seems like it's being added just to give it more volume, I at least skip all these dialogues and so far they're not needed. If you want to continue with them, that's fine, it's your story, but I recommend simplifying them and not going into unnecessary details that don't add anything to the story. Final rating 7.5/10.

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TDSD_1
3 months ago
Replied to Kuuhaku_28

Why not give them all?

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TDSD_1
3 months ago
Commented

He only gained these authorities and not the 10 like godou did in og?

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TDSD_1
3 months ago
Replied to LORD_ASHURA_

It's a little disappointing that it's her, but so far the story is going well, I'll keep reading to see where it ends.

TDSD_1
TDSD_1
3 months ago
Commented

Note: Written in the translator. I would just like to know if there will be any romance, if so with whom? Or will it be a harem? (please no Hermione, I'm already tired of reading stories with her)