"Furthermore, you have to try to use your spiritual force when you jump. Gather your spiritual force at the soles of your feet, and unleash your spiritual force right before you jump… What? You are asking how to gather your spiritual force at the soles of your feet? Of course… Um… You have to discover this yourself."
Start With Contracting Sprites
Urban · Bimo Zhijian
I agree that it could be planned out better but a bit of foreshadowing never hurts a story too much
He failed to realize that the moment the certificate was issued, his fate with this woman was already intertwined. He could not discard it away, nor could he avoid it. The wheels of fate were already in motion—from the initial rejection to the gradual mutual attraction, and eventually becoming each other's "one and only," would this all happen in due course?
The Genius System Without Equal
Urban · Straw is crazy too
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original Mining Incorporated System
Matthew was a average high school boy until he was struck by track-chan and killed at an early age. Due to his early death God deemed him worthy to be sent to another world full of magic and monsters. Even better he gets to bring a cool system, skill, item, etc. Sounds fun huh? It isn't Matthew was chosen to have the Mining Incorporation System. He basically owns a mining company in a world where you can fight other worldly monsters.6 Chs 11 Coleções
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Living in Another World is gonna be a Cinch
Saudo wakes up in a new world with no memory. He is a Summoned adverturer and is supposed to fight against powerful monsters. After recieving a special skill that allows him to raise his stats at a unprecedented rate but he has to get himself hurt to activate the skill he faces the mental challenge of if he wants to use this skill. This is a huge blessing if he was a masochist.12 Chs 6 Coleções
*PLEASE READ THIS REVIEW ALL THE WAY THROUGH BEFORE DOING ANYTHING* I absolutely love the idea of this book and it should have been an enthralling story. However, as I read into the book it became more and more apparent that the plot of the story was being made up on the fly and that there was only thought as to that exact moment in the book. The main character was made fairly okay in the beginning but very soon he became like the traditional cardboard cutout of an isekai protagonist bearing no unique qualities and his voice and actions we as though they came right from the authors head making the Main Character fell less like a person and more like a puppet. and the "People" around him were even worse, not only were they used to info dump every few chapters but they orbited around the main character draining the chance that they could have had to have a well fleshed out personality. The plot feels forced and like a match made in heaven, making me feel a little weird because although I am not opposed to it, it makes it harder for me to really place myself in the character position and it breaks the immersion I would normally feel from a book. Now with all my nitpicking out of the way I actually really liked this book. The idea and concept behind the book were phenomenal I was so happy to see someone finally make a book within this category of multi-dimensions, and I must say good sir that this author did a wonderful job with his world-building and how he structured the way everything is supposed to work. I think that this author is not bad at writing but just needs some experience with the wording because info-dumping is okay in any book the only thing is that you need to word it so that it is easier on the reader. The characters need a little more fleshing out and they need to be a little touched up but that can be fixed with time and a little bit of hard work. Overall, I liked this book and to the author. This is a bit of constructive criticism and I hope you take it with a grain of salt as I really liked the concept of your book and I would love it even more if it can reach new heights with this review. I HOPE THAT YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY.
Hero System! Transported to Another World
Fantasy · Ripcorez