Alesand

Yep, you did. You said that he would not in the top 3 of the Strawhats team power, he would be a strategist

No, I meant that giving the team the opportunity to learn some skills through the system is a bad idea. I'll explain why - all heroes have some unique trait. Everyone receives their unique skills over the course of the story from Oda Sensei. Giving them something else on top is not a good idea, since this is a unique trait of your character, and sharing it with everyone on the team - well, it’s just not clear why. This is how he helps his friends develop their skills. He helps his friends develop their skills through his advice. Why give more than that? And I don’t really understand your philosophy, to be honest. It’s just hard to believe that a person with a system would want to be in the background regarding his combat power. Yes, being a strategist and the brain of a team is a cool idea, it really suited me. However, your idea that he won't be a top fighter on par with Zoro or Luffy is a strange idea

In addition, adding a gamer system is not a bad idea, but only if it is limited to dungeons, for build-up, a set of resistances and other things, but definitely not magic, this breaks the entire background of one piece.

Well, what can I say. The author of the web novel Gamer was criticized for the fact that the main character began to share the system with everyone. Now your MC does it, adds a party system. In addition, in the canon, all the characters went through a certain stage - loyalty to the team, after which the relationship in the team became better. But with your hero, it’s the other way around, he always saves everyone, but they still bully him... And yes, reading bold italic font is not the most pleasant thing you use often.

Was it just repeating three times with different words? No, with the same words...

So, another chapter about helping the Targaryens. Targaryens here, Targaryens there. He has received nothing from them yet, nothing. So he will probably sacrifice something else in the conflict with other Valyrians when a conflict occurs. 50 chapters about the main character hanging out with the Targaryens. And there’s this phrase that the skin of Dragons cancels magic. I'm sure the author will introduce someone into the story wearing dragon skin clothes and oops, all the MC magic is useless Where is the development, 50 chapters of simple chatter, the plot has not moved at all. The main character has not even fully mastered his given abilities, but for some reason he studies the runes of the first people and the Valyrian ones, and conducts experiments. Where have you ever seen someone decide to build a house without knowing how to nail something??? Why the hell experiment, at least tell me what he achieved in what Dumbledore and Grindelwald possessed. Can he, like these two, use their own spells without a break, can he also fight? How much has he mastered transfiguration? Another point, if you can’t pierce the dragon’s skin with magic, pierce it with lightning or a huge stone spike, which you can transfigure from anything.