Great work but still need a lot of improvement i hope the chapter get edit so it will be more readable
Come on man where dignity of ruler where the power
so beautiful
i give everything solid A+ intro, plot, grammar, plot progress not slow or to fast
i mean their so much dxd fanfic have so much about mc being devil rather than human that what make it boring because you can already the plot.
cant he transform to someone with sword talent just like he transform to become best chef in the world or he can only use 1 spirit power at the same time
i like your author it tickle my chunni heart
i think i already read somewhere
do mc really have parent in this if yes please give a hint
maybe because i read a lot of Chinese novel that make me want to see a lot of blood and killing.
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