Thebrownhulk

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2019-02-25 Unido Global
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Moments 11
Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
2 years ago
Commented

+1

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
2 years ago
Posted

I like the start not overly detailed. No problem reading. It looks promising I hope to see me chapters.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😤

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
2 years ago
Commented

legen wait for it dary

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Commented

Cliffhangers make me violent😑😡💥

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Commented

+1

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Commented

Gone in 60seconds?

"Ok what car to take to school for my first day?" As I finish that sentence I spot the only car I've every wanted, even in my past life. A beautiful grey 67' Shelby GT 500, that's right. "Hello Elenore, you're looking awfully sexy today." As I slowly walk and slide my hand across the side from the bumper to the door handle and hop in. Turning the key in the ignition, the roaring engine makes me feel at home behind this wheel. I notice there are racing gauges on the dash as well. "Oh yea I need to see how fast you can go baby." 'But not now, just need to get to school.'

My Own Lucifer In The Multiverse

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Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Posted

I'm ready for more chapters keep up the good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Posted

Please don't drop this I really love this book. I hope to see more pages in the future. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😤🔥

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Posted

I like they way the story is going so far but the main thing is the grammar needs a lot of work.The second isn't as serious is the character design. I feel you could give him a little more depth but I think you could leave him as is and it would still be a good story.😌👍🏻

Thebrownhulk
Thebrownhulk
3 years ago
Commented

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