Finally he shuts up 👍🏻😂
'I feel as if I'm in a different bod—' Joe had a fleeting thought, however, a sudden wave of vertigo hit him hard. He was mentally depleted after fighting for his survival. Soon, he collapsed against his wishes as he tried to hang onto his consciousness.
Anime & Comics · OneArmedImmortal
What is the point of rebirth/reincarnation if he doesnt remember his other life ..? Memories makes us what we are without them are you really you? Might as well stay dead because you are dead both ways and the one living the second life might be the same soul but it sure aint you
R.O.B "very well then. All your wishes shall be granted. Now for the downside, you will not ever remember meeting me or getting your wish. You will forget your previous life and all your previous connections. Now you will not remember the Plot, but you will be drawn towards it and you will be able to remember some plots as if you were seeing into the future."
TV · Demigod76
Why would he do that ? Dont say he is just a normal guy etc this is not a normal reaction , humans react with anger towards fear so as to overcome the fear , so if someone swings a sword at you you dodge and swings back you dont stop yourself from defending youself it illogical
Yu Tian tried to stop the sword with all his might, but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't do anything and the sword continued to cut the man in half.
Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
Technology doesnt work in the shelter tho ...?
After punching he goes to the treadmill, to test his speed. The machine will tell the data instantly but first it will gather data from all the equipments and calculate the fitness level.
Anime & Comics · Hell_Dragon_Azavok
Where is the story? No interaction no plot just informing us he just did things , you can just combine all the chapters from the start to now into two or three sentances there is no story here , no plot , just nothing. sigh... good luck anyway..
Este livro foi excluído.
Or annoy them ...
Este livro foi excluído.
Kinda stupid
[Don't worry, it will be shown to you every day the moment the sun rises in the east.]
Movies · SlimeSage
Tbh the story is kinda more castle less noah you should try to include the mc more or get him more involved if someone really wanted more of castle they can watch the show tbh a fanfic is usually to make changes to the og not add a background character that makes minimal changes to the story but its still early so cant really judge it for its just a thought not a problem with the story also the switching of scenes is not bad but maybe space it out a bit between chapters? Good luck and thanks for your work
A lot of things at play right now. Where is the MC in all of this. How will he come into play. To find answers to all the above questions and more. Please.... read the next chapter. Pretty sure it's released by the time you read the note below as well.
TV · Hellblaze
The story is good but the song lyrics are too much tbh and quite distracting would be better if you just leave it at the song name and suggest to listen to it instead of this because if im reading the story then next line is the song i would need to reread the lines again then try to skip the lyrics to be able to picture the story maybe you are going about it like it would be with a movie with BGM but it doesnt do as well in text anyway thanks for the chapter a good work so far
How? He doesnt have any tools to do that no matter how much of a genius he is Even with his rubber body he would still need tools 🙃
My gaze fell on the device I had assembled from available materials. The principle behind this receiver was quite simple... at least for the current me. However, due to the poor quality of the materials, the final product was quite flimsy. Fortunately, it managed to indicate the direction of the wave controlling the horde.
Superior Reed Richards
Anime & Comics · Arcane_Eso