midnytgal

Finally! Have been looking forward for the resumption and continuation of this interesting supernatural novel. Hope the author will regularly give weekly releases of more than 2 chapters . Kudos to the author for writing this novel and making a difference from the usual werewolves stories out there. Highly recommend for reading!

everybody deserves a 2nd chance. Why didn't Daniel explain to FL the whole thing about being a mate and all the consequences of a rejected wolf mate so that FL would have a whole understanding of the mate thing. I agree that Keenan need to be taught a lesson and suffer the consequences of his actions to Angeline. That moment of realization of the importance of his mate hit Keenan when Angeline died for those few minutes. And everything he is doing after that "moment of realization" is to find his mate and bond with her. So why not give him the chance to apologize and explain to Angeline the "Shxx##ty" stuffs he did. it will be up to FL to accept him back or not. Isn't what Angeline demand for Daniel to mark her a form of denial of the mate bond as well? isn't this going to be another cycle of torture for all three parties involved. one going feral, and two individuals who wouldn't really be truly happy knowing since they're not true mates.

The English and grammar is soooo bad and the story line and the dialogue and choice of words use is soooo shallow. Not worth reading. sorry for being blunt. But I have read some other novels here with bad English and grammars but at least they have good story line and the book can be redeemed with the right editor. Hence, to encourage the author to continue with their creative writing , I refrain from making negative comments. so, this is actually my first time to make a negative comment. it's that bad. don't waste your time. As for the author, good try but not good enough.

Initially I like the novel as it has unique plot , although there were some moments in the early chapters when supposedly Luna is showing her "independence" and "strong personality" towards Apollyon that kinda made me quirk my brows on her conversations with the Vampire King, which feels like she is arguing with him just for the sake of arguing and showing she is different from the rest of consortium. Anyway, I still trudge on reading and see if this will improve. However, the quality of conversations between characters sometimes are disappointing although I still like the devt. of the plot. But in some chapters towards the end and these last few chapters, the dialogues between characters gets so boring and so cliche. It feels like the writer is just dragging out the dialogues with Luna. According to author, she is playing the "devil's advocate" in questioning her husband's action in bringing her back from hell. What is all that nonsense of "goodifying" the evil fairies that were used to sacrificed to bring her back. It feels like back to the cliche of arguing just for the sake of an argument. Hais! Any more chapters of this kind of "Luna" dialogues and am dropping this novel and not waste my precious coins. First time am giving my 2 cents worth comment bec. I like the plot and I hope to see the author step up and improve on the quality of conversation content with the main characters. Keep fighting author-san. Hope you take this on a positive light