Nebel

Nebel

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Always looking for fluffy harem romance stories without much dark stuff. If you'd like to talk about those, feel free to add me on Discord: Nebel#4835

2018-09-24 Unido Global
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Nebel
Nebel
1 months ago
Posted

Read up to chapter 48 so far (free chapters). Similar starting problems that I had with Stealing Spree. I just really dislike the MC and the whole "salesman" past of his sounds soooo sketchy and like absolute human scum (like "talking old grandmas into spending their last savings into a miracle cure" type of person)... Another problem I personally had was the pace of the relationship development. I'll try to avoid spoilers, but it went from 5% in the past year to 100% in 2 days. Combined with his new found ability to actually (maybe) manipulate people or at least emotions to his will, it's quite questionable how much of it is the poor girl's free will or something else. But as I mentioned before: I had the same problems with the other novel (Stealing Spree) and really really hated the MC and relationship development at the start. I only kept reading because I liked the modern world setting and had a friend who promised me that it (the relationships) would get better later on. By now, I really love the story and read every single chapter. But even so, I don't know if I have the strength again to fight through such a start once more. Especially if I don't know what will change and the constant fear of how much "fake" feelings are in there with the kind of ability the mc possesses.

Nebel
Nebel
1 years ago
Replied to Drago_20

And? Did you got up to chapter 30+?

Nebel
Nebel
1 years ago
Posted

The start was really enjoyable. Girls and story felt interesting, there was character and relationship development and overall it was just fun to read. Sadly later the "romance" part just developed in a direction I really stopped enjoying. Later everything was just about sex. There was no relationship or buildup anymore. It felt like the whole "pregnant" stuff was just added to add anything else then sex to the relationship... but that didn't really helped at all for me. Even worse was the whole "me and all my girls are getting porn stars"... the whole "i care for the girls I sleep with" also got less and less true. Fucked an arachne in a dungeon, (friend of the sister of his girls). She moved on herself into his home ceiling, but was never mentioned or cared again for. Centaur, who he may have knocked up, never got mentioned again either. He even fucked a hairstylist just to get free haircuts... So cool... not... Additionally the story also just got harder and harder to follow. Strange time skips and what happened in between got hardly explained, stuff just was "set different" and as reader you had to deal with the new situation without any explanation how it got there... Just a lot of stuff like that. So... yeah, first 1,5 books i really enjoyed. 1,5-3 was basically just wild sex and porn career and in the 3 book i just lost overall interessed, skipped through the already payed chapters and hoping to get into a bit more meaningful romance again but couldn't really get into the book anymore.

Nebel
Nebel
1 years ago
Commented

Hope you are fine mr. writer. I was really happy that you came back and now its already silence again :x

Nebel
Nebel
2 years ago
Replied to Meta0202

Nope, no lolis here. I mean, they are high school girls and i think there was one girl mentioned, that wasn't as far developed as others. But buy far not "loli" as you probably imagine them right now.

Nebel
Nebel
2 years ago
Replied to Nebel

Hello everyone, Just quick update after 824 Chapters; My Review still stands. After the start the story stays really "similar" overall: - Super slow paced (one day may have up to 10, 20 or even 50 chapters, so story progression and character growth is slow as well) - huge harem (all girls stay around, get mentioned from time to time and have their own special chapters. They don't fade away. But since there are just so many of them, some just don't have time to develop much depth.) Overall: - If you look for a fluffy, feel good harem story without much drama: Read it! - If you just fear the huge harem, but enjoy fluffy harem stories in general: Try it, Dyrem does a quite good job handling those many girls. - If you looking for a story with a lot of depth, complex characters, exiting story turn-arounds etc.; Its probably not to your liking.

Nebel
Nebel
2 years ago
Commented

Just wanted to leave a quick "thanks". I really appreciate, that you continue to write and don't drop this novel, even if you struggle with it. Take as much time as you need, i'm happy about every new chapter, even if i have to wait a few weeks for it =D

Nebel
Nebel
2 years ago
Commented

really lovely chapter... i definitely enjoy those parts when they just talk about their feelings, the relationship itself etc. the most... just some great fluff with meaningful romance :x

Nebel
Nebel
2 years ago
Posted

I really enjoy those east going harem romance stories, especially in modern settings. Personally I would prefer some less tragic background (since it's not time travel but alternate universe, I really feel bad for those girls) but it's fine I guess. writing quality also improved a lot since the last novel I've read from the author (well partly read, only read 300 chapters of Kings Mandate and lost interest then)... the wording of feelings still is a bit off from time to time, but overall quite good.

Nebel
Nebel
3 years ago
Commented

Author said, that he lost inspiration already around 50-100 chapters ago... he still tries to finish it i guess (i returned two times already to write ~30 chapters each time) so just wait and hope that he still tries his best to finish the story... even if it may take some time :x