it was good
Speaking of which, how was it? Good? Bad? Any criticisms? (about the writing, not what was written) cuz this is my first time, so idk if it's shit or not. (If any of you masturbated to or because of this, let me know, I'd take it as one hell of a compliment :3)
(COMPLETE) Jester~
Anime & Comics · Bored_MC
good ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Este livro foi excluído.
+1
Vote here for having POVs in separate chapters when we have more than one
Predator of Star Wars: Hunt(old)
Movies · GoldDragonMachina
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I don't care, just give me a new chapter
Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Rise of a Monarch
Anime & Comics · NoobMastar69
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
Solid fanfic premise mc isn't stupidly op thats a huge plus, like the harem choices, English well executed. would for this to continue but understand if author has moved on from this idea.
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original Sinful life in Naruto
I died and was put in a wierd situation, but I think I can have fun. Disclaimer I don't own naruto or any of the characters warning: incest, harem,2 Chs 114 Coleções
unrelentlessly is a double negative, so it is the same as saying relently as to relent or give up, unrelenting or relentlessly would be correct here. this isn't a complaint about Grammer, just an FYI if you are trying to improve.
She was stronger than Itachi, of that he had no doubt. Which was why he refrained from clashing with her head on, but she being smart and understanding her advantage pushed on unrelentlessly.
Crows x Souls
Anime & Comics · QuackVader