Grimace1118

Starts out well but starts going downhill after he finishes his training arc and starts to interact with the main cast. Quickly starts to bash the OG story characters and Shrek out of nowhere. Like MC has absolutely no reason or motive to be so aggressive to any of these characters but does so anyways. Paragraphs and sometimes even entire chapters are also sometimes out of place and jumbled up.

I bet you live and breathe fics where it is a man who has wet dreams over a woman and inserts himself into the story