LordyKodiOko

LV 5
2018-08-22 Unido Global
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Moments 26
LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
3 months ago
Commented

Yes it's good

"Est-ce que tu vas bien mon amour?" She asked speaking French staying in her Morticia character.

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Movies · Flaming_Lines

LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
8 months ago
Replied to ABananaStoleMyDog

Yes, couldn't find a mention of credits.Or inspiration if a deviation has been planned later down the line.

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LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
1 years ago
Commented

*climaxing

…she was climixing! Naruto realised. She hadn't even touched herself!

Naruto Hagoromo: Rinnegan no Kami

Naruto Hagoromo: Rinnegan no Kami

Anime & Comics · LostSamurai1974

LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
1 years ago
Commented

Then, he only has to copy the quirk of his mother and he can transform into others as well.

That was the case when her quirk awoke, while Neito couldn't copy appearances like her, he could copy quirks by default, so he figured he should also have a similar effect as her when awakened, their quirk's were pretty similar after all.

MHA: Carbon Copy

MHA: Carbon Copy

Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker

LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
2 years ago
Replied to Sexy_Guardian

Yeah in court, but putting the information out will still decrease his rep. I think. But he could just make her disappear so I don't understand why she's confident.

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LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
2 years ago
Commented

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LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
2 years ago
Replied to ZombieSirGatoREAD

That made me spit. Good job.

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LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
2 years ago
Replied to LordyKodiOko

The following is the end of the rather long message before : Because waiting for new chaps is killing me.

If you have any tips on writing action I would greatly appreciate it.

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Anime & Comics · RokyesLt

LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
2 years ago
Replied to

Huh. I just discovered that there is no warning when you bypass the word limit on a comment.

If you have any tips on writing action I would greatly appreciate it.

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Avatar : How to become a Badass

Anime & Comics · RokyesLt

LordyKodiOko
LordyKodiOko
2 years ago
Commented

I'm not a writer but I'm going to try and give an idea :D Take it or leave it, I will have no problem with that. So, why not 'afk' when you arrive at the fight scene, take some time to imagine the fight you want to happen in your head. Almost like a video. Take the major points on paper and write around that. So that the 'only' thing left to write is the connection between the moves. And then you can check if the text bring to life what you had in your head. By the way, great fanfic ! I find myself in the situation where I wish I discovered this story later on. Because waiting for new chaps is killing me.

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If you have any tips on writing action I would greatly appreciate it.

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Avatar : How to become a Badass

Anime & Comics · RokyesLt