I am really enjoying it. My constructive criticism would be slow it down a bit. Keep up the wonderful work!
or is it Original Human
Race: Ori Huma
Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Arkusar
It's interesting enough that I keep checking for new chapters but I don't have a feel for the story and where its going yet. (Translation: you didn't lose me at the first paragraph or chapter and its good enough that I am curious as to what is going to happen next) Keep it up :)
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Villain Seized the Assassin Heroine at the Start!
Anime & Comics · Evil_Duke
Suggestions 1. Light a fire under it and burn that block 2. Put it in a wood lathe and make your own writing sphere 3. Take up carving and turn your block into a new dream 4. Make a boat or raft to sail sea of imagination but most importantly don't let it just sit in front of your door of creativity. Kick it around every now and then and give it a good look. A block has 6 sides and if you kick it hard enough you might see a whole new side of things.
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Harry Potter but AU???
Book&Literature · DAFR
keep putting into words the creations of your thoughts and dreams. The more you do what you enjoy the better you will get, The haters just what to stop you so you can be broken like them.
rest and feel better, we're not going any where.
High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic
Book&Literature · DonnutHermit