I don’t like her tone. Why is he sharing his life story with her anyways? Get her sympathy?
"Keep talking."
Criminal X : Epitome Of Evil
Fantasy · KhyaaL
This angel is so annoying. I can’t wait for her to just disappear or not be able to speak.
Cupid asked some more times after that but she received no answer from Pablo. He was just staring at the people spread around the cluster of things.
Criminal X : Epitome Of Evil
Fantasy · KhyaaL
Finally showing her true colors. Hope he makes her and Matilda pay. They are just act so entitled.
"Don't kill him or critically injure him, just suppress him" the princess said in a cold tone
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Eastern · VenerableDio
I don't like that this particular sentence is speaking in absolutes, but the story is very interesting, so it's okay I guess.
Unfortunately, all Asian parents do that.
Manipulative Harem God
Urban · SKuLL
Oh, ok. Was mainly curious as to your purpose for correcting the grammar mistakes. I mean in this novel, so far as I can tell, though I could be wrong the author didn't actually stated that he wanted or needed someone to edit the spelling mistakes. But, yeah I get what you are doing now for the most part.
The tears fell on the ground and mixed together and entered the frozen ground, a sprout emerged from the ground and within few breaths of time it grew to the size of a tree, the tree had no leaves only a purple fruit, the purple fruit slowly began to take the shape of fist sized women.
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Eastern · EvilGrandpa
But you know what since it is a single fruit maybe it is a woman, but I was under the impression that they were several women. Just one little gal seems a bit dumb. Even though I do notice constant spelling mistakes I don't even bother to point them out. I don't think the author even bothers to edit the spelling mistakes. As long as the original intention is understood I am happy. Do you perhaps have OCD when something is misspelled?
The tears fell on the ground and mixed together and entered the frozen ground, a sprout emerged from the ground and within few breaths of time it grew to the size of a tree, the tree had no leaves only a purple fruit, the purple fruit slowly began to take the shape of fist sized women.
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Eastern · EvilGrandpa
I don't know what your deal is or if you are just trolling because I keep seeing your comments to only correct the vocabulary of things. It is indeed women. Woman is single and women is plural.
The tears fell on the ground and mixed together and entered the frozen ground, a sprout emerged from the ground and within few breaths of time it grew to the size of a tree, the tree had no leaves only a purple fruit, the purple fruit slowly began to take the shape of fist sized women.
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Eastern · EvilGrandpa
I am glad I was able to help. You too have a good day and all the best on those exams.
You are free to take my suggestions into account or leave the story as it is. I just bothered to correct the spelling mistakes that I think I saw because you said you wanted that, and I like the story enough to take a bit of my time and do that.
How cliche. I think I will drop this book. I skimmed ahead and the angel is still there.
'No. For two years, I was out of the crime world. A girl came into my life and I fell in love.'
Criminal X : Epitome Of Evil
Fantasy · KhyaaL