shienly

female LV 5

love to read any fairytale

2018-07-17 Unido Indonesia
Emblemas 5

Moments 3
shienly
shienly
4 years ago
Commented

plz can u shorten the story, like for example, from all 5-6 chaps, the only main point that i got is basically the eldest n second know that xiaolu is their lil sister but u have to write in all 6 chaps, its kind of waste of time to be honest. we want to see more plot, not some kind of unimportant conversations. i truly love ur story😘😍💖, i have start ro read it since long ago n basically the more the story comes to a near end, all i can see is u drag the story into a slow motion drama😥

shienly
shienly
4 years ago
Commented

plz at the very least let the brothers know the truth🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

shienly
shienly
4 years ago
Commented

yeah it feels like the author only can dragging the plot again and again