Flaiver

Not the best name, I read with Google Translate and it's hard to read. He translates everywhere she is not he. So I hope you will use another name or nickname.

Great novel, spent a week reading it non-stop. It has everything you need from such a book: politics, war, tanks, planes, ships, and everything else. The book ended with a huge positive. In general, I can write here for a long time, but in short, 10/10 I recommend it to everyone.

I liked it, I have no idea why someone gives it 1 star. Yes, this is not a masterpiece for the ages, but quite a good fanfic with humor and an interesting story. It's quite interesting to read about the smart Luffy who loves to train. I really like the fast pace of the story; by chapter 90 they are already in Alabasta. I would rate the fanfic an 8/10, but everything on this site is below 5 stars trash.

This review is to support the author, otherwise that good novel has so few reviews and a rating of only 4.6 that it is not enough for this site.[img=update][img=recommend]

Review after reading 58 chapters. In short, 7/10. Now more details. From +: it’s difficult to single out something. From -: 1) Annoying AI (his constant comments on obvious things). 2) A very long introduction (The story starts around chapter 50). 3) Too many details and unnecessary information (this wouldn't be bad if it was an original story). Based on the above, I give this fanfic a 7/10 or above average. But since on this site everything below 4 stars is complete garbage, I give it 4.5/5. In fact, this can be called a review of the introduction since the story has not yet really begun.