whyyyyty

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2018-06-27 Unido Global
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whyyyyty
10 months ago
Posted

Top of the line very good I think it only has a few bad chapters in the beginning where he is born he kinda acts a little slow but only to show he is a baby demon who has lots to grow

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whyyyyty
2 years ago
Commented

my author my author where are you

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whyyyyty
2 years ago
Posted

look bro i havent read much but i alredy have a few complaints 1 your synops of the book is more like a summery u cant just write the whole storys ending in the synops cus then it has no room for growth you should of just seid mc becomes a npc your title alredy does the rest 2 you make the mc seem unique in a bad way cus he will just always have the most easy cheat hope he is not the only 1 who has hax in your story you beed to make worthwile characters besides the mc

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whyyyyty
2 years ago
Posted

One of the best books written in this website it is very well rounded to the point of almost perfection the mcs harem is written to grow naturaly and it is not forced because the mc is capable enough i would say its one of the closest books to reverend insanity and custume made demon king also the story is centerd on adventire and self ambition withoght letting the harem cprrupt the natural flow of a realistic life the mc fights againg actual competent rivals and the mc is able to actualy struggle when he walks his path

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whyyyyty
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks a lot hope u can get the aknowledgement this gem deserves also hope u write more om your other books 9/10

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whyyyyty
3 years ago
Commented

Look man thanks for another chap but how u gona do me like this i cought up from chap 1 in less than 2 days i neeed another 4000 chapters asap

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