Meeting himself... please, no timeturner BS... ><
Oh, Space Bag?!
No prob, that's great, thanks :)
I am gratefull for the quick update lately, butI believe ur in a dire need of proofreading before publishing. I've tried to comment under some of the most glaring issues for easier editing, but post-editing is not quite as good as proofread. Thanks for chapters.
missing word between could -in. Maybe "appear" or "strike"?
The first one was that fang yang had already shown before, the Venom Fangstrike. By using deceptive movements and an explosive outburst technique Fang Yang's spear could in front of the enemy with speeds that would make it seem like teleportation to the average untrained eye.
I Am a Necromancer in A Cultivation World
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
one too many "his already"
His already powerful comprehension when combined with his already with the snake soul that could passively guide his spear movements had a terrifying multiplicative effect when used together, allowing him to progress through the stages like he was flying.
I Am a Necromancer in A Cultivation World
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
as he was training* I'm not sure in witch aspect he's talented here, doesn't seems to be mentioned.
Fang Yang didn't know if it was because of the merging of his two souls during his transmigration but as it was raining, Fang Yang found out it wasn't bad, in fact, he could even be described as rather talented in this aspect.
I Am a Necromancer in A Cultivation World
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
This phrase need editing i believe
Besides digesting the tensing to Qi absorbing fruits and bringing his cultivation to the 6th level of the Qi refinement stage, he had also a spent nearly all of his wealth on his Battle Saint Corpse puppet.
I Am a Necromancer in A Cultivation World
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
Not cool to drop the Eragon story...
Marvel: I Started by Containing SCPs
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