oh your right. different people different mind set. even if they know things like that happens, specially in world with magic, lords and slave. they will question everything that does not go their way. tnx for the replys. good luck with your novel. 😊😊😊
…I knew I was kidnapped, or something like that…but they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, right…? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this in…He thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy · DelzGB
and that is what im pointing at. the stupidity of the mc. VR or not that is his reality now. i think you wrote the mc as a double standard person. when his fine and happy no question ask, but problems and danger this VR should not be like this. its a good idea and story by the way. 👍👍👍
…I knew I was kidnapped, or something like that…but they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, right…? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this in…He thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy · DelzGB
i'm pointing at the fact, vr or not, npc or not, that is the mc's reality. death is death. its his only reality now. can he return to his past life, i think its not mentioned. so what ever the npc do that his reality. he should have accepted that fact long ago. the way you wrote this he even love his parents now.
…I knew I was kidnapped, or something like that…but they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, right…? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this in…He thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy · DelzGB
there is a warning, death is true death. anyone with a brain will think its not a game when your life is on the line.
…I knew I was kidnapped, or something like that…but they're planning on selling me? Hold on, this is a virtual reality, isn't it? At least, it's something artificial, right…? Why would this be an aspect of it? I don't see developers adding an event like this in…He thought.
Online In Another World
Fantasy · DelzGB
its your fault his late.😴😴😴😴😴
Suddenly, she heard screams, loud wails of pain and agony. She turned to look in the direction where the sound came from and mumbled, "Took you long enough."
Ace Of Terrans
Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
if it is a girl, mouth to mouth. if boy just pour. 😉😉😉
He quickly grabbed the satchel and quickly took out the bottle of grape juice. Then he forced open the old man's mouth and poured the juice into his mouth.
God-tier Farm
Urban · Gentleness In A Steel Gun
then why is the girl chose to pass there. its like thats the only way. 😕😕😕😕
This place was remote and it was rare for people to pass by. It was also because of this that the three hoodlums dared to act so brazenly under the influence of alcohol.
God-tier Farm
Urban · Gentleness In A Steel Gun
one of the worst i have read. reader says its a copy paste story, so? the original is also like this? 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
is trying killing your ally not evil enough? he left him to die.
- Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Rise Of The Hoarder
Fantasy · Magecrafter
sitaw 😁😁😁
Shi Tao.
Ace Of Terrans
Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH