OoguruRyuuya

OoguruRyuuya

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2018-05-23 Unido Germany
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OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
11 hours ago
Commented

Hopefully he manages to disarm Dumbledore and complete his set.

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

One of those three is dilusional. Guess who.

White Zetsu informed the Akatsuki about the events in Konoha. Despite their aloofness and arrogance, almost all of them were shocked by what had happened. Needless to say, what shocked them most was the improvement in the Edo Tensei jutsu. After all, if Orochimaru had reanimated a dozen dead Kage against them, they would be in extreme danger. Forget defeating him, even escaping would be a challenge. The only ones who still had confidence in facing him were Nagato, Itachi and Hidan.

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
1 months ago
Commented

So did Heracles not have God Hand or did the Resurrection Stone prevent it?

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
2 months ago
Commented

Called it :D Since I got one thing right, here is my next prediction. The prophecy Dumbledore intends to break at Hogwarts is 'The Boy Who Lived'. Poor Neville is gonna die.

However, all those thoughts were overwhelmed by a very faint memory of a conversation of Arcturus Black. In fact, it was one of the earliest conversations he ever had with the man, one regarding the founder of his house, of the creator of the first magical crest, a man rumoured to have bent space and time itself to his liking, a man who had discovered the very source of magic itself, "Kronos."

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
2 months ago
Commented

Wasn't Chronos the name/title of the only wizard to ever master time manipulation? Maybe Harry can stumble into an inheritance here like a typical MC.

Olympus, one of the most historically significant locations, was a place that the ancient Greeks considered to be the home of the gods themselves and he could see why. It was a place probably filled with as many secrets as Hogwarts, maybe even more.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
2 months ago
Commented

It came out great. Could use a few more paragraph breaks though.

AN: Well, I still feel like hell, but this chapter wouldn't leave my head. I wasn't planning on releasing anything today, but before I knew it, I was done with it. I didn't even re-read it properly, I'm too tired to do it. I barely skimmed it, and I honestly have no idea if it came out well or not. So, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions. I don't mind rewriting it when I'm better.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
2 months ago
Replied to Pasheret

No no. The Infinite Tsukuyomi is supposed to show you things that you would want to see.

[A/N: I wasn't aware that Ryuchi cave was shown in Boruto and had to look it up when I came across it. I recall reading the three tests in some of the fanfics I read earlier. For a moment, I thought that Boruto took inspiration from the fanfics until I realized that it had come out nearly six years ago, lol.]

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
2 months ago
Replied to Sasa_Ihab

That feeling is likely because you're reading the story chapter-by-chapter as it comes out. If you were reading it all at once you probably wouldn't notice it nearly as much.

Baki gulped his saliva nervously as well. With a grim expression, he thought, 'Impossible! He blocked the full power attacks of a rank S ninja, 3 Elite Jounins and a Kekkei Genkai wielder and suppressed another rank S ninja with the same technique! How is this technique so powerful? How can we even counter it?'

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
3 months ago
Commented

The chapter was fantastic. The only thing missing to make it perfect for me is a few normal wizards to give reactions and tell the tale afterwards.

AN: This chapter was kinda hard to write. I tried to make Harry as terrifying as possible from Voldemort's perspective. I hope I pulled it off, but I don't mind rewriting it if I didn't. It would be a pleasure to rewrite it and incorporate new ideas. I'm already looking forward to writing the next one. Anyway, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

OoguruRyuuya
OoguruRyuuya
3 months ago
Commented

I was kinda dissapointed by the first half. Not because it was bad but because it was nothing new and because I really want to see the fight. No reason to rewrite it though.

AN: So, it's finally snake hunting time. I'm excited to write this part of the arc. I hope you like it and if you know, I'm open to rewrite the chapter if it doesn't come out right. It's kinda an important chapter so I wanted to do it properly. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr