my guy why are you making the mc braindead it's no wonder he died I'm surprised he is not dead already. I get you seem to wajt a weak to strong trope but for the crying out loud man give your mc basic common sense there are enough brain dead mcs. And the whole woe is me I'm scared and away from family bs does not cut it here he's been in 40k for near a month and is just barely actually thinking things through. He for some reason could not put together maybe just straight up breathing toxic air is bad for me and could not even be bothered to look in depth into his abilities? like why man? seriously why it makes no actual sense.
Because rather than quality it's quantity now. pushing out as many fics as possible and slapping on locked chapters for sub pat quality translations in the hopes people spend more money. Sadly this platform has gotten outrageously predatory with their prices and how they have lowered quality of fics.
I'm in no position to criticise, but the majority of translations are subpar. Let's not even mention the wordplays and euphemisms that are so abundant in them.
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
no seriously it makes no sense for someone to be so stupid.
'Now I understand why my nose is burning and bleeding… damn it!' Internally, I cursed and raged at whatever force had brought me to this world, while outwardly, I could only show my resignation and weariness.
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
Why is the idiot either a drooling moron or one step above one.
"Know anywhere they might need a hand? Ricciardo sent me here." Gino's eyes flicked between the three figures, having made up his mind.
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
Huh so what it's like an entity gave him and his followers actual protection from chaos? I mean it's interesting but as people have said chaos is literally just one faction basically there are many other factions. I mean many of the necrons are still asleep and I don't think the main fleets of the tyranids have arrived yet if I remember right.
[•The Forge System extends this blessing to every member of your ships, stations, platforms, and faction members who have sworn loyalty to you. Those who follow the Forge Lord are destined for absolute greatness, free to impose your will across the galaxy.]
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
isn't there the mcu vs. I think it's the comic version? is that the inferior? As I know in one he was the child of a celestial and another he was some alien kings kid.
Although his death was a harsh memory, It was a stark contrast to the hardships faced by this body's original inhabitant. The loss of a mother to cancer and subsequent alien abduction leading to the wretched conditions of his current captivity.
I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
Movies · AlienWarlord
You are also kinda forgetting that overall, that territory only has the mc's house. The other houses in that region are frankly too minor, poor, and have no claim to the land the MC has worked on. You make it seem as if lords would sling shit in a region that most can not be bothered with, and no houses have any justification to interfere. you are pulling up supposed issues out of nowhere for convenience.
still better than an edgy murder hobo that many seem to love on this platform.
It was only after many years of patient reasoning that Corvious found a way to convince Kolly. He decided to take a different approach, offering fabric instead of clothes. Explaining that he could tailor his own clothing, thereby preserving their master and servant bond. This wasn't something grand, but it was one step in the right direction.
Winds Of Magic In Hogwarts
Book&Literature · KuroWashi1903
Just want to say thank you for the release ans love this story! Keep up the great work.
to be fair while he was pretty critical if you actually read over his review he highlighted some pretty big points of weakness with the character and overall story. I mean the guy isn't bashing it he just wants it to be better.
Star Wars: Senator
Movies · L0rds2278