It's a good story and character development, Nice ending giving a possible story development.
The story is too fast and missing some important details, it's a good story line but you need to give it substance and fill up the missing pieces.All in all a good job just needed some revision.
Romance with Magik so they can be called crazy couple.
Thanks for the chapter, keep up the good work 🙂🙂🙂
mione
Hermi? Mione? My little PogChamp? (no)
Movies · HPMan
send pic here,, cant find it on the discord..
You find the official discord for the novel here: https://discord.gg/XCEDp7H9tA
Anime & Comics · HavocHUN
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Why place a camoe on Forever Series? Isn't these the moment Henry and Abigail meet.
Captain America was relieved when he saw the man. The doctor was very impressed. These days, Captain America leads the Roaring Commando to show his prowess on the battlefield, but logistics is also important. This doctor named Henry Morgan is extremely skilled in medicine and has rescued his team members from the crisis of death several times. Captain America also respects him very much.
Destiny Unbound [Marvel X DCU]
Movies · Mad_verse