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Hello again PWS, sorry for bothering you once more and only commenting in this type of occasion. On the second part of the chapter the last two paragraphs are repeated with slightly difference again.

hello author, in the middle part of the chapter half of the paragraphs are repeated with slightly difference between them, the final part is alright.

hey @draejon I'm happy that you returned to write the history but please review what are you writing, these chapters you written after you returned are written in circles, 2 to 3 paragraphs say the same things with different words and little adds in each of them, this is completely unnecessary and your readers aren't kindergarteners

@sahejRocks the 4 and 7 paragraphs are the same and Amaeron is written as Aemerion.

hey @Ynghuo_392 you need to do little corrections on this chapter and the story in general: blue legion is legião azul not azul legiao in Portuguese the color is after the object in the phrase, and chorona is the correct in this situation.

hello, this history will continue or have been dropped?

this is a question that I have for some time: what's ea?

Hello Author, I'm still reading so I don't know what lies ahead, but if you intend to form a harem do it in a way that makes sense in the story, a good example is First Demonic Dragon, the author knew how to give importance to female characters in the harem and in story in general, despite the many lewd scenes. I like your story so much.[img=recommend]

yes, i liked it😁