i doubt you would do it cuz its a bit busted but could he just corral a charging enemy into a portal to nowhere if its mindless enough. i mean he can bring others through the portal so it stands to reason he can send his enemies to any messed-up place u can think of. good so far btw.
Glad ur continuing. Like where it is going actually. I don't read many of the comments so I wouldn't know who is complaining but I like what was written so far.
i mean digimon and pokemon are on the table for some strong support. and maybe 'Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple' would make for a good training world since the martial arts are pretty good.
nice SpongeBob reference. me thinks salandit has some trauma, poor girl. thx for the chapter.
Interesting so far. Remember to stay away from crazy. Would be ironic to be killed the same way twice because the supposedly smart MC just couldn't learn his lesson.
Just remembered addictol is a thing in fallout if you want to add that with the stimpack
No need for a rewrite, and the nzt isn't even much of a problem. Only thing you might need a flashback for would be with the interupted meeting with the mayor and police due to lizard. Can use captain Stacy for that to flesh him out more too. Great work so far.
ah yes, it's all coming together. gonna be fun seeing batman have an aneurism over planet zane if it comes up lol. Always knew he was gonna have sweet digs since the homeless wonderer just didn't fit him. I honestly can't figure what the citizens will do for better living since the basics are covered; besides maybe various forms of competition being maybe content creation like movies, sports and games or other forms of media and academia since what the hell would workers be good for. Though that's another can of worms with its own set of problems. thx for the chapter.
Mainly just random ideas, plus it's more of a why not at this point, Zane is more of an epic vacation to pass the time kind of guy from what I read. He doesnt owe the league anything and he cares about the relationships he has. Makes sense to me to leave them on a good note before taking in the sights and have a grand adventure. Plus im pretty sure he gave various serums and stuff to them already based on his private conversations with the kids mentioned by batman
has to be gyarados, cockyness must have a price. interesting so far.
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