it's a bit annoying the constant complaints from readers, it's a game creation system novel and a crossover with marvel as the main one, what's the point if he doesn't get into the universe interacting and changing things? if he only made games and you saw the reactions of the other characters it would get boring very fast, personally i like when he gets into other characters and what he does is quite funny, compared to the first novel of this type i read this one is much better than the other one.
She will have some power or something else? taking into account that she is a clone, it wouldn't be strange that she would try to make her more resistant so that what happened to the original one doesn't happen.
Where is the gif from?
Her face instead of looking forward was looking back. Luke was not finished yet. In a fury at the hag for tearing his expensive clothes, he channeled his psychic energy. He reached out with both hands and summoned telekinetic waves, pushing the hag as hard as possible.
TV · Nathe07
don't leave out the slice of life, many novels skip those parts which leaves a novel with too fast a pace and therefore less content and shorter, personally what I like most about novels are the interactions between the characters and the changes they have in their way of thinking after all it doesn't take a traumatic event to change the characters as many do.
"I don't want to wait so long just to see the sequel of it, you're so slow." -> Six chapters will be uploaded today. The volumes will be shorter just to prepare the Mazurka (unless the readers want more slice of life). I'll try to update more often too, just a promise yet.
TV · Frowfy
i think you should combine the two options, there are not many mystery novels out there and being the addams you can't miss that, a 60 slice of life and the rest mystery. so far i really like the way the story is going.
2. I like this development, I want to see the sequel of this story as it is.
TV · Frowfy
will there be romance? i hope so, in LOTM i would have loved to have romance so please let there be romance in this novel.
Personally I like to think that he didn't suddenly become stupid but that he saw this place as a new beginning giving himself the opportunity to trust, thinking that maybe it would be different that he wouldn't be alone, after all if you never had anyone deep down you would be desperate to have someone to trust no matter how mature they are, after all feelings are irrational.
"What good has it all done me?"
Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
i can understand that some may complain but they already implied that to some extent he is being influenced by destiny, hence the difference between how he treats others and how he treats logan and oliver.
Though Isaac knew Katlynn wasn't in her right mind during the events that occurred before he'd entered his scenario, it didn't change the fact that she knew he was the intruder, including his strength.
Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
at some point you will upload a photo of the protagonist? you could use one AI
Consciousness thundered through my senses as the coldness of night swept past my bare skin. My eyes began to flutter open as the voracious nature of reality around me brought a calmness to my mind. Winter winds grazed my skin and caused goose bumps to rise along my exposed arms and legs. I was wearing a small pair of pants and shirt that were barely enough to cover my assets. Looking down with my actual eyes I saw the odd sight of light purplish skin refracting small amounts of moonlight. My nails were a beautiful obsidian black and gleamed in the moon's hollow light. My ears twitched as If they were a moveable appendage, something that was soon confirmed as I tried to twitch them again.
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
will there be a moment when a player gets into trouble in real life and shows how the game affects his decision making in those moments? for example ned. thanks for the chapter.
Game Creator Multiversal (Marvel/DC)
Video Games · Alex_Simmonds