Thanks for your thoughts. There is more POV changes coming, but they are for significant events.
Emmett thought to himself, I guess that's a bit strong for a human. Wonder what he would say if he saw Rosalie lift that with one hand and no effort. I should just pawn him off to Jasper. "I am spending all the time I can with Rose right now Thomas, some family stuff going on has her on edge. I could talk to Jasper and see if he is free. He is stronger than he looks, even beating me in some wrestling matches."
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Yeah, not looking to burn myself out on the story. Releases will be Mon Wed and Fri. I do agree that its a little overly slow paced though. I will try and pick that up at some point, too easy for me to get lost in the details though.
Thought I fixed that already. Thanks.
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If I can make it smooth then it will happen, if it feels forced to me then it wont. Not super far ahead in chapters yet so lots could still change.
Just like it. Nice catch though, wasn't sure any would.
"I am Isabella Swan, and this is Thomas Raizel, this is our first day." Bella used her full name; I can count on one hand the number of times I have heard her do that.
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Because of his emotional trauma he is more aware of others emotions. It's easier to notice and deal with other peoples emotions than your own. Also he is naturally observant because of his past.
"Anyone that sticks so much as a finger between those two will lose their hand to Alice and their arm to Jasper and that's if they are lucky." I finished.
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If Gohan did go SS2 then he should have forced Cell to puke 18 out before he got his arm messed up saving Vageta. So 18 should be alive in this time frame right?
If he had directly destroyed Android 18 with the remote control at that time, it would simply be impossible for Cell to perfect his body and Goku and the others would not have died!
Reborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-Sign
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Glad you are enjoying it. Feel free to leave a review if you wish to take the time.
Lemons there will be, just going to be a while. Still lots of foundation work to do.
His outfit was so casual it looked like it was designer clothing. The shirt design especially stood out with the Yin Yang symbol lining up perfectly with his pecks. She took joy in noticing that the little bit of opposite color in the Yin Yang was directly over his nipples. Oh… if I was a hundred years younger… The things I would do to him. I could finally use all that information the Denali Coven had forced me to listen to. Tanya especially, that little succubus.
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A.U. of the Twilight series. Thomas Raizel is the broken, adopted brother/cousin of Bella Swan who joins her on her trip to Forks. Edythe Cullen is the twin sister of Edward Cullen and used to having everything she wants with but a few words. Leah Clearwater is the first ever female shifter of her Tribe, or is she? Can Forks contain all that is coming to it?14 Chs 524 Coleções
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Amalgam Universe Beast Boy
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This book will be LOOSELY based on Amalgam Comics. An old combination of DC and Marvel with a few more things added for my enjoyment. A 36 year old Garfield Logan is a military veteran working a Museum security job. A robbery goes wrong and our story begins. He finds himself in a different body and wouldn’t you know it he doesn't just have to worry about a big purple nut chinned simp that wants to kill 50% of all living things to impress his crush, Death (Balance my A&&). But he also has to worry about an Anti Lifer whose look really can kill. Seriously Darkseid, take up a hobby, learn to paint with more than the blood of the innocent. Set up an adoption agency for abused space animals and retired Paradeamon’s. Something, just leave Earth alone. This is my first time writing and I am doing it for my enjoyment. Will look forward to comments and constructive criticism but complaints will have a better chance of getting to me of you scream them out your window and I happen to be walking by at that time. My greatest hope is that this story will inspire someone else to write a story I will enjoy. Going to shoot for daily release but I have to work to do the things I enjoy so we will see. I don’t own the Pic’s or the Original Characters concepts. Also I accidently placed this in Novel instead of FanFic so moved it. Sorry for any inconvenience.132 Chs 7.7k Coleções
Hmm, not necessarily, I had my first thumb drive in 2002. Also if you google "When did Thumb drives become popular?" the answer is early 2000s, so I found no reason to change it.
"That's ok Mr. Banner, my biology is strong so I shouldn't struggle too much. If I do, I will be sure and let you know." It may have been my imagination, but this teacher came off as very condescending and stuck up. Good thing I held back on asking him if his first name was Bruce, I probably wouldn't like him when he is angry. The class proceeded normally, but I could tell that it was going to be a waste of time for me and Bella. We were both in the accelerated class in Phoenix school system and what we are learning in this class is about two years old to me. Good thing I kept all my past assignments on a thumb drive so I could just reuse them. Poor Bella being the old lady type, she hand-wrote all hers and I know she didn't bring them with her.
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