MCoronado

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2018-03-02 Unido Global
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MCoronado
MCoronado
16 days ago
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Thanks for the chapter I would just like to see what the MC could do with the more celestial side of his art, not just the evil lovecraft side of his.

MCoronado
MCoronado
1 months ago
Commented

I don’t really like the devour ability, is used too much, hope he doesn’t get the Nen abilities of others, just skills and gas volume otherwise it will get boring quite fast.

MCoronado
MCoronado
2 months ago
Commented

Repeated chapter?

MCoronado
MCoronado
2 months ago
Commented

Dissapointing

Neuvillette continued, his tone unrelenting. "The verdict, as decreed by the Oratrice, is guilty...to be punished with the death sentence."

Dxd: The Primordial Judge

Dxd: The Primordial Judge

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MCoronado
MCoronado
2 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, I love the concept/ idea of the story. Only a few doubts, can you forcefully summon a living being against his will and bound him as a servant? Even if one consider the being who got in the throne who allowed the MC to be summoned, was Angela killed just so she can be summoned as a servant?

MCoronado
MCoronado
2 months ago
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Sorry to say this but a sorcerer supreme that it’s not human plus the confusing timeline (that could be AU), I think I’m gonna drop this

MCoronado
MCoronado
3 months ago
Commented

I personally liked more when it was 2, but yes it’s enough Besides maybe a better description of the NP, I also prefer for you to focus on the story. I guess most of the cost of the NP goes to the buff Maybe just give him the mind eye or clairvoyance skill instead of putting it in the np, looks weird. Thanks for the hard work!!

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MCoronado
MCoronado
3 months ago
Replied to Ryusui_Suarez

Will do!

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MCoronado
MCoronado
3 months ago
Replied to Ryusui_Suarez

Not really. Many servants actually have 2 np and more than one has more than that like Perseus, Achilles and unnamed non-Hassan.

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MCoronado
MCoronado
3 months ago
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If he becomes an Admiral the Marines and world government should have access to his ship so his tech, or no? Again I think this beats the low key approach that he wanted