Anyway, keep on writing. Your story is interesting after all. I'll be waiting for more. May the muse of creation bless you with inspiration ~
For now, I'll cast my power stone to this story.
My review for this story is that it is too wordy. You know what I mean? It is good but somehow, I don't know...reading this makes me cringe...reflexively. It's good but change the words to simpler form and phrase. It's a web novel not a novella. Anyway, I'll be waiting for more chapters. I'm interested in the plot so if the same problem still persists but the storyline is still good, I'll probably just have to endure it. BUT, if the story became stale and tasteless, I'll just stop reading it all together.
Ayieee 😍😚😚😚
Rezen almost blushed from head to toe. A handsome man saying that he won't let people harm you is just too visually appealing!
My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!
Fantasy · KenceRussel
Furure boyfriends huehehehehehe
"Just what is the relationship with these two?" Macy wondered before she flew away
My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!
Fantasy · KenceRussel
Yey for Claude !!
Rezen huehehehe 😆🥴 You just ate Claude's tofu 😆
The Captain just finished emerging from the shadow on the ground when Rezen pounced and hugged him
My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!
Fantasy · KenceRussel
Don't give in to thots! Have them compensate you! Also contact Claude because I think what that girl did is technically illegal. It also shows you've got connection with officials.
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original GAME : DOMINATION
"Ding~ Dong ~! Congratulations! You are the 1 millionth player. One of the lucky chosen ones who has been given the rights to become a gamer and the last person to be chosen among the 99.986% non-player human population! You are now part of the 0.014% who has become a gamer. Congratulations! Congratulations! Congratulations! " Suddenly receiving a Gamer System that made him like a game character, Angelo Cruz together with his aid companion Muning starts their journey at becoming the strongest in this cutthroat world of Gamers. Being the last one in the race, will he come up on top among the million of players around the world? "Mou... Wake up nyaa~!" Or not... Tune it and find out nyaa~27 Chs 70 Coleções
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Castle of Monsters
Mateo Sanchez is one of the children spirited away from the campsite that day. It's been two years since then and the ten year old boy already matured greatly beyond his years. As he escaped from the strange lands he landed into, will he ever get back to his parents? Or will he stay forever in these lands filled with monsters? ======= Stumbling upon a castle, the little boy trudge his way up and knocks upon the castle's doors. There are different kind of monsters inside, with only one missing on a vampire's castle. A witch.... "I can be the witch"7 Chs 12 Coleções
Interesting . Waiting for more 😆
Cartoons System In Marvel
Anime & Comics · The_Angle