milordd

milordd

female LV 10

i promise i'll update ^^'

2018-02-08 Unido United States
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Obras originais
Emblemas 10

Moments 32
milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Posted

I like the concept of this novel and after reading the first few chapters, I think the execution has been great. There could be some work on editing overall, with grammar and so on but it isn't a big deal since everything is easy to understand. I'm excited to learn more about the characters and can't wait for more chapters!

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Replied to Ceehillm

me too! i would add the dead fish meme in the story but it would ruin the immersion lol, i'm glad you kept up with my story even tho i hadn't updated in a week basically 😭😭

Lin Qiuyue flopped onto her back, fishes this, fishes that, she would rather be a dead fish with two large X X over her eyes and a motionless body.

Quick Transmigration: Enthrallment

Quick Transmigration: Enthrallment

Urban · milordd

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Posted

I've read a few chapters of this novel and I like it, the characters are clear and the motivations are well written. I think the writing could be improved in the grammar and spelling departments but that can just be edited when the author has time. Overall it's another genre stable, I enjoy the themes and I'm looking forward to how the author will take it going forward!

Este livro foi excluído.
milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Replied to Ceehillm

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it, there will be more updates to come, and more arcs with different settings! 💞

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Posted

I love this novel! It makes me want to root for the couple because their relationship seems so adorable, they have a good understanding of one another and I'm jellyy. Where's my one in a lifetime blooming romance, truck-kun where are you?? Isekai me now! I can't take it anymore 😩 The writing is clear and the transitions are smooth, I love the descriptions and the characterization. I think the author has both heart and talent and I will be waiting for more updates! <3

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Commented

i am waiting patiently for the cute fluffy romance, the prologue hyped me up but Keira isn't interacting with her lover, i'm impatient for the sugarrr 😩

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Commented

god, she's so hot 😫🔥, step on me mamacita

She stepped away and the man's blood-encrusted hands only grasped the empty air before him.

Beast and Prince

Beast and Prince

Fantasy · Ceehillm

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Commented

don't be seduced comrade! the revolution must continue, down with the monarchy!

If Kiera could use three words to describe the Third Prince of the Solomon Kingdom, they would be: cocky, clever, and irresistibly handsome. With his stunningly vivid emerald eyes and golden blond hair, the Prince was quite the sight for sore eyes. She would have never thought she would come to care for such a man.

Beast and Prince

Beast and Prince

Fantasy · Ceehillm

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Commented

would they be immediately killed if they plugged their ears? 👀 how about secretly, convertly?

Jade winced again at the sound of the Solomon King slamming his fist down on the armrest of his throne. Her dark hair fell below her shoulders in curly ringlets as she shook her head, trying to get the King's voice from persisting inside her sensitive ears. The youngest, Cody, tapped the side of his head with his hand, also trying to shake out the King's voice.

Beast and Prince

Beast and Prince

Fantasy · Ceehillm

milordd
milordd
2 years ago
Replied to Ceehillm

thank you!! honestly this chapter has been rewritten at least 3 times, so it was going through a lot 😭

  • Quick Transmigration: Enthrallment original

    Quick Transmigration: Enthrallment

    Urban SYSTEM TRANSMIGRATION BEAUTY POSSESSIVE HISTORICAL REBIRTH SEDUCTIVE COUNTERATTACK MULTIPLEIDENTITIES RICHDAUGHTER

    In that space of nothingness, a voice called out to her. "I've finally found you." ••• After death Lin Qiuyue was picked up by a little green[1] system who persistently advertised the benefits of being a host to her, the little telemarketer went on and on for days and nights until she finally agreed. Smiling happily it reassured her, 『This won't be unfavorable at all host!』 Before she knew it her tasks had already begun, the mission objective was simple, to make the target fall in love with her in every world. But why were things like this?! In the first world, the vengeful master that she was meant to seduce slaughtered nine generations of her family in a single night, struck her with a sword and said with a smile, "I will let you experience the same hell that I did." In the second world, she wasn't even a human, she was a doll created by an archmage and thrown out of sight. Before she could leave that dingy and dark tower, she was notified of her target, it was her creator...the very same archmage who had discarded her! In the third world, she had the carefree life of a nouveau riche born to parents who spoiled her. She finally praised her little system, it knew her so well, she really needed a break in the modern world after her previous tasks, both in historical worlds. She was finally back in a place she was familiar with. There was plumbing and electricity, even her favorite mobile games. Oh how she missed these simple luxuries! Seeing her so happy, the system couldn't bear to break it to her. 'Host, that target over there is staring at you with burning eyes and has an affection meter of -35...' 1. green - inexperienced note: the male lead is the same person in every world 「Original Story」 「Started: 1/22/23」

    15 Chs 54 Coleções

  • Vain original

    Vain

    Fantasy ROMANCE VILLAIN REVENGE HIGHIQ

    4.6

    Vain, a new otome game pushed into the public, marketed a new type of experience. A self changing game with all decisions made by the player. Quests are unlocked by actions of the player, and the actions of the player, itself, are unlimited. Players are to type their own speech, dictate their own actions. Which in turn leaves the effect of the players actions unlimited. No endings are alike. No heroine are alike. All characters can change.

    77 Chs 1.2k Coleções