Despite the use of a common trope and lack of originality concerning both the name and idea, it still doesn't detract from the joy of the story. The writing is slightly immature and it shows both in the characters and in the world building aspects. However, I find that the story is not only enjoyable but even slightly interesting. I find myself, both curious and looking forwards to see what this story becomes and, to the changes to the writer's style as they mature furthur.
Despite the use of a common trope and lack of originality concerning both the name and idea, it still doesn't detract from the joy of the story. The writing is slightly immature and it shows both in the characters and in the world building aspects. However, I find that the story is not only enjoyable but even slightly interesting. I find myself, both curious and looking forwards to see what this story becomes and, to the changes to the writer's style as they mature furthur.
Transmigrated into a Noble's beaten son
Fantasy · Nezothecat