I know it really doesn't matter but Artorias fought the abyss when it first appeared in Oolacile which became Farron and they used to travel from land to land fighting against the abyss until they themselves were affected.
So, after thinking about it for a bit, he ultimately made his decision to fight one of the Lords of Cinder: the Abyss Watchers. They were not one person but a group of knights who fought against a mysterious and powerful force of the abyss—an evil force from the place called Farron. They were inspired by the legendary wolf knight, Artorias, who fought against the abyss's influence attacking Farron. They took inspiration from him.
Shadow slave: Dark souls system
Anime & Comics · Otaku_Gamer_00007
I will preface this with saying, I want to give this a lower rating, I can't sadly because it's only one aspect that I dislike though it's arguably the most important. I am on chapter 35 now, I don't think I'll be continuing sadly because of a single thing. the MC has revealed meta knowledge, only marginally at this point but it's enough. I'll admit I mostly just hate Danzo and the root and it's clear they're gonna be important continuing forward so I'll be leaving early.Regardless of my distaste for Danzo I have an even bigger issue with the system and the far too many critical downsides.First, it takes too long between simulations, I can sort of understand this one but it's still annoying.Second and likely my biggest issue with this system, the system is limiting him in such a way that he can't use it for anything but getting simulation points as he needs them to get his natural capabilities back, most significantly with his learning abilities being hindered immensely.if everything else wasn't better by such a significant margin this story would have run into the ground on the disappointment of a system long ago.if I do come back to this and i find it better than I expected it to become i will update this review but so far i am disappointed.
Those are literally the games I've played recently and in the correct order as well, that's hilarious.
As I asked that the wall ROB was staring at suddenly disappeared and a big wheel suddenly popped out of nowhere. The wheel had multiple colours with different names on it. It had exactly 10 colours with 10 names on them. Those were - Overlord, Highschool DxD, Naruto, One Piece, Elden Ring, Genshin Impact, Terraria, Skyrim, Marvel, DC.
Gamer in Overlord
Anime & Comics · Student_Of_Culture
it's a shame you've decided to stop, but I understand completely. Enjoy your break from writing and do something fun. I hope you return to this in the future as this is a great story with a lot of potential. Be proud and come back stronger!!!
Thanks for the feedback, I'm actually working on the next draft of the book now, sadly I won't be uploading it as in the past my work was stolen and sold on Amazon. Thank you for the support and I'll be sure to take what you've said into consideration while I continue working on it!!!
half dwarf and half elf.
Focus on yourself when you need/want, it's your life and your book, we're just the lucky ones who get to read what you write. on another note I've been enjoying the recent chapters a lot, keep up the good work!!!
You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed. My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.
I've enjoyed this arc so far but it's your story and I can see what you mean, I found myself doing the same in my book towards the end glad you saw this in yours and decided to fix it. Your book, Your rules.
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original The Craftsman
4.51
This is the story of Daedalus on his journey to the peak of craftsmanship. Daedalus has died and been reincarnated by the god Hephaestus to try and reach the peak of craftsmanship. Watch his journey making friends and become incredibly powerful. See how he uses his creations and kills god's. (Tell me tags in the comments of the latest chapters please!!!)Tags: Cultivation, Swords and Magic I thought I would just go ahead and make a quick note, on average each chapter is at least 500 words long. This is because I don't have that long everyday to write a chapter, it's why I try to make each chapter seem like just another part of the previous one. I'm slowing down on chapters lately, once every Sunday, because I am doing a bit of a fanfictiony thing in the latest chapters. I asked if I should make it a side book thing but my readers wanted it here so yeah. I am doing a bit of MHA and other books I have enjoyed lately like Spiderman and marvel stuff. Quick thing, I love reading people's comments so please say Hi if you feel like it, I love feedback!!!491 Chs 1.3k Coleções
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The Wanderer°
The son of The Craftsman, a wanderer at heart he left home in search of meaning.1 Chs 2 Coleções
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Mortal Body Refiner
A young mortal found a hint into a secret world, follow him on his journey into the land of cultivators as a seemingly normal mortal.8 Chs 8 Coleções
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Immortal Of Ancient Times
This is just something I am writing for the sake of writing. I might just suddenly drop so don't expect much, okay? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ A baby was sent into the ancient past, without knowledge of the future the boy was raised by creatures of the mesozoic era. The boy had been granted strange abilities before he was sent back in time. His most prominent is his incredible rate of adaption and his immortality.1 Chs 12 Coleções
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Gaia's Pride
It was a normal day, before time stopped and people became near immortal. every night the world's resources restart to on that day, but whatever we use through this cycle will stay. Technology bloomed ,and the world became peaceful, but life became boring. the governments solution was to create a Vr game, and by putting the smartest minds of the world together something amazing happened. It was a new world of adventure and fantasy that no-one could have imagined was possible.3 Chs 6 Coleções
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The Hardest Fight
The Craftsman
Fantasy · WickedQueen2