Mooncloud

Mooncloud

male LV 5

My works are currently on hiatus, writing a worthy novel for the meantime.

2017-07-07 Unido Philippines
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Mooncloud
Mooncloud
Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to BASTILLE

Really? I might need to rewrite that or just make it so he's going to develop real good soon to support that statement. I was trying to write it safe cause if I did it 5'6 or higher then he'll mess up the movie itself. Well, thank you for pointing that out!

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Dean Richards

Dean Richards

Urban · Mooncloud

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Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to SageOfSins

I'll be able to update more frequently soon, just trying to slip this chaps in my time for now. Scheds a bit tedious since I'm a Nursing student. Though thank you very much for your support!

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Dean Richards

Dean Richards

Urban · Mooncloud

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Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to Acsmaster007

The thing is, I'm trying to write a person. Someone who has feelings. Humans are social animals, and most needs the presence of others in their lives. A person can also be selfish but still have genuine friendship with others. If a real person who has spent most of his life with someone dies and reincarnates. He'll most likely be thinking of doing whatever it takes just to meet that someone. I assure you, though that I'm not going to linger for too long in matters regarding Mark. Also, regarding helping others. it isn't something dumb or cliche, nor does it mean Dean is a pushover. You either help others for the sake of it, or you do it as an investment; in terms of financial and emotional favor.

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Dean Richards

Dean Richards

Urban · Mooncloud

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Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to SageOfSins

Thank you!

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Dean Richards

Dean Richards

Urban · Mooncloud

Mooncloud
Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to Inplay

yes, I've missed a few but important details in the previous version as well as the way the story progress. I've reviewed and hated how limited the affect of certain events such as the attack on Brennadam. There will be a lot of changes, though I believe it is for the better.

Mooncloud
Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to enoc_sierra

Let's see, it would be possible for Jaina. Sylvanas too was my favorite character and I would have made her the lover of our mc if she wasn't taken.

Mooncloud
Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to Alvinbrrrrrr

Yep he might still be young, but that world doesn't have the same moral values we have in this world. In fact, you won't find it weird if you were exposed to sexual relationships at a young age. Also, I didn't explicitly said it but he's reincarnated. Just wanted to slowly drop information instead of bombing em in one go. But yeah, you can read his thoughts comparing the world to earth in earlier chapters, I'd be damned if I wrote a reincarnated person without sexual experience, and even wouldn't chase skirts if given the chance to.

Her tear-stained eyes glued at the once gentle face, that soft, gentle hands that held her body tightly were now driving her away, indifferent to her plea. She was thoroughly confused, but more than that, devastated. She wailed. "You've already sullied me!"

Avatar: Romance in the four nations

Avatar: Romance in the four nations

Anime & Comics · Mooncloud

Mooncloud
Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to Chin1234

Must be sad to be plotted by your future father-in-law. Who knows, Ozai might have liked him enough to spare some time for his daughter's birthday just to see Haji. Though, that's impossible, the guy's cold-blooded.

Mooncloud
Mooncloud
3 years ago
Replied to 125678901234567909

Not really, I have different plans for the mc. He might be part of major events though, but the outcome wouldn't change that much.