R0berto

R0berto

male LV 13
2017-11-18 Unido Global
Emblemas 22

Moments 375
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R0berto
1 months ago
Commented

Seriously, how important is the captain in this part of the story? 😮‍💨

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R0berto
1 months ago
Commented

It's good, it just needs to polish the dialogues and interactions and not add too many things in a short period of chapters.

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R0berto
3 months ago
Commented

Yes, I think the world I create is screwed and I expect a character death for the plot.

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R0berto
3 months ago
Posted

................................................It's stressful to read since he joined the navy and I'm leaving it since I wanted to entertain myself and not get stressed out

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R0berto
3 months ago
Commented

Enserio que manera de bajar el interés de la gente y meter estupideces en la historia y que huevada de ver almas hace que la historia se vaya a la mrd.😮‍💨😮‍💨

Este livro foi excluído.
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R0berto
3 months ago
Commented

Okay chapter I hope you ignore that magician and can't send another empty church

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4 months ago
Posted

estaba bien en lo primeros capítulos pero después se dió un bajón y lo peor son los saltos de tiempo no sirve para nada los deja como estuvo antes del saltó con diferencia mínimas