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William a young man adventurers in a world of war and destruction. He quickly learns that his skills and abilities are put to the test as he faces many challenges. However, he perseveres and eventually becomes one of the greatest adventary in the land.
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I think it definitely has potential, but I also thing it needed a little more time in the pot to really fulfill these ambitions. I think it could have used a prologue to really flesh out the world building towards the start, but it's definitely not completely necessary. My primary gripe is the quality of writing, The title needs some work, and some of the grammar is off, lacking in flow at some portions. With that, I hope to see you improve as you continue into the future!