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Escreva uma avaliaçãoThis book is so good I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out I think u should also make a sequel or 2 sequels for this book it’s that good so keep making your story’s for us to read
Hello everyone, the author here! I am happy to introduce my new work! I hope everyone who reads this novel has as much fun as I do writing this. Thank you for stopping by and reading! Any feedback is welcomed as it can help me improve in my English and make the story better!
Good story! felt a lot of potential for story progression keep going and don't be like some dog **** authors who drops novels for no whatsoever valid reason.
This story is absolutely amazing, everything from the weak spirits to the alluded "Pigmen/orcs" to his start of a dungeon owner. To be honest, if he got his intellegince to the point of controlling more spirits easily, he could easily turn into a stealth killing machine. Hide in the trees are around the corner while his spirits go haywire and kill everything. I can't wait for volume 2, best of luck!!
Revelar SpoilerWay there is no chapter today .........???....??..?................................................I want more chapters this is not enough one chapter a day .........................
This is good. Too good. Craving for more chapters!! The world building is good. The way the characters develop is also something to look forward too. A very solid story.
I liked the story, it started out similar to others of the same type, but it gave a different tone that brought more originality, its progression of prsongem is good (not very fast). I just want one more thing, more and more chapters.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's a good book I enjoy the concept I hope you keep it up the background design and the character design is well-thought-out I'll be looking forward to more updates in the future
Dear author, If you are reading this can you please let me know when you plan to pick this back up again. I know you were hospitalized a few months back and your mind ain’t really here on the novel but I just love it so much and was hoping to know when the next chapter would come out. Love you. Ps. I hope you are recovering well also sorry but imma have to give you a 1 on stability of updates cuz it been a few months.
Im enjoying the story so far looking forward to more --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far it's a very good read. The variety, as well as the depth, of all the character's abilities make the story much more interesting and has alot of potential for future chapters. So far my only critique is regarding the character development, as most of the characters are very one note and archetypal. However, the story is very much in its infancy and hopefully we will probably see more character development as the story progresses
Just here to give the rating. The grammar could use some work but its a pretty interesting story overall. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
When will you write the next chapters for this book it is really good I can’t wait tell you write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it
It's a great story so far. Although there are some areas where I believe the reactions and choices from some characters would be different, it largely still makes logical sense. The story develops at a good pace, and it seems to break away from many cliches from this type of story (at least so far). My 3 biggest complaints would be: 1) There are numerous elements that feel a little railroaded. Hopefully this will change, but it is still at an acceptable level so far. 2) I have noticed numerous grammatical errors. For example, there are multiple words used incorrectly (probably due to autocorrect) and there are many areas with misused commas. A dedicated editor would help. 3) The release schedule appears to be unreliable at the moment. To be fair, this isn't really the fault of the author since there was a statement that significant health issues have arisen recently (including hospitalization due to complications from a surgery). It seemed to have regular releases prior to these issues. Although I don't want the author to rush his recovery, I also want any new readers to be aware of this beforehand. Overall, I feel it is well worth the read. Enjoy!
Very interesting every time the updates come out? I think it would be better if the bonuses obtained from the skills are put together with the normal attribute points because they will be impossible to change the skills and not exceed 7. I can not wait to see his army of spirits and his next skills would be interesting an ability to transform into an intangible and phantom-like being that gives a sort of immunity in physical damage or that drastically diminishes the damage
Man this story dragged me in. Normal summoned to another world premisd but it is handled well, the gore and action give a totally different feel from your average japanse isekai. Cant wait for more chapters
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Autor CrimsonEclipse
Really amazing and in depth story that will keep you on your toes, characters are relatable to and the story is moving at a good pace. Writing is very good with only a few spelling errors every once in awhile.