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Capítulo 4: 4. Chapter 4

A/N...

Khushi Mehta, Doll promise doo din pehly sy ready baithi hoon update k sath, reviews k wait mein... Itny km reviews py maira bhi update kerny ko dil nahin kerta na yar... Love you dear, thank you and stay blessed... :)

Piyali, Thanks doll I am fine... How are you...? Yeah dear mairi update iss baar bhi ready thi kb ki but reviews ka wait ker rahi thi main, as itny sarey readers hoty hain aur itny km reviews aaty hain tou maira dil nahin kerta phir update kerny ko... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Jerry, Hahahah yeah I just forgot this one, hehehe... You know na thora chota dimagh hai maira, hahah... :D Larki ab ki baar late update kerny mein maira koe kasoor nahin hai yar, main apni update k sath ready hoti hoon but reviews hi nahin aaty yar jb k readers itny dhair sarey... :( Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Priya, Hahahaha what a bad luck doll, hehehehe... Easa hi hota hai yar, main bhi puri film nahin daikhti bs jb aik important point ka wait hota hai exact ussi time light chali jati hai, hahaha... :D Doll daikho main apny next chapter k sath bhi ready hoon as reviews ka wait kerty kerty main ny doo chapters complete ker liye ab aap jaldi jaldi review karo ta k main bhi jaldi sy update ker doon... Thank you dear and keep smiling... :)

Pinky, Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Siya 01, Oooh koe gl nae kuriye, sorry di koe lor nae yar, love you... Thank you doll and stay blessed... :)

Guest, Dear the answers of these questions are given in the story, you need to wait to know them... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Guest, Hmm plot is really nice dear and having a great scope in it... Aaa dear I take time in writing a story, wasey ab tk tou aap ko yeh baat pata chl hi gae ho gi, hehehe... At this time I am busy with my some stories so yours this story will take time to be executed in a proper way as I need to work on many things especially to take such issue where both are right in their POV's... I will surely try to write on this plot, thanks once again with a tight hug, stay blessed dear... :)

Poonum, Hahaha nice to get you back yar and thanks a lot for yours precious feed-back, love you... Thank you dear and keep smiling... :)

Aditi, Firstly I asked about love and hate, not liking and disliking and obviously you cannot push some one to like the thing which is something other than his/her taste and then about shipping characters in different ways so dear we do this according to our story's theme and plot... Its the need of stories and while writing we will comfortable with it so do this thing... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

GD, Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Jyothi, Yar aap ny koun si episode ka poucha hai, bilkul samjh nahin aai, soo sorry dear... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Guest, Dear the answer is in the story... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Raveena, Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Sweet Pari, Thank you doll and stay blessed... :)

DUO Angel, Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Rukmani, Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Guest, Keep on guessing dear, the answer will be revealed soon... ;) Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

shzk, Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Guest, Hahaha yeh janany k liye intizar kerna ho ga dost... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Krittika, Hahaah yeah doll main abhi nahin bata sakti kuch bhi... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Sukhmani, Oooh doll please don't feel sad yar, mothers are the best yar... Main ny kabhi father-daughter relationship enjoy nahin kia as our mother brought us up single-handedly but its life yar... Jo hai ussy khul k enjoy karo aur jo nahin hai woh aur bhi tou bohut sy logon k paas nahin hai na... As bohut sy logon k paas tou parents hi nahin hain, still they smile and still they live their lives... Love you doll and a tight hug from my side to you, love you a lot... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Navvulu, Hahaha pata nahin yar bs reality py focus kerti hoon main zada aur realities zada tr cruel hi hoti hain shaid issi liye mairi stories mein bhi woh cruelty aa jati hai, hehehe... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Guest, Hahahahahahahaha ooh my Lord, hahaha ufff chalo ab saza tou milni hi hai chahy kuch ho jaye tou ab main bhi tension-free ho k aagy likhon gi, hahaha... :D :D Nice guess, yeah he is the same, bach'chi akalmand ho gae hai, haha... ;) Haye itny dhair sarey sawal hr update py pouchy jaty hain mujh sy jb k main abhi kuch bhi nahin bata sakti yar, daikhty jao aagy aagy main ny bari kharabiyan kien hain, hahaha... Lobe you dear, thank you and stay blessed... :)

Katiiy, Hahahaha yar CID mein sy kisi ko lati then bohut sari aur cheezon py bhi effect aata na... This happened due to some reasons, which will be revealed in the story... Thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Sheenam, Hahahahahaha arrey yar story mein wohi date hai bs Jennie ki death anniversary main ny bari calculations ker k nikali hai yar, mairy Maths ka tou aap ko pata hi hai, hahahaha... :D :D A tight hug for you aur batana kitni ribs tootien, hahaha... ;) :D Hahahaa phir patience rakhi k nahin, heheh... Love you doll with a big and tight hug... Thank you dear and keep smiling... :)

Subhsresaha, Haha tum goli maro confusions ko yar sirf enjoy karo, main sb solutions doon gi na sweety... :D Hahaha ab pata chala Mohina ka character ks sy impress ho k likha hai, hahhaah... :D :D Hai na sweety tumhara rhyme wala idea kaam aa gaya yahan, hahahah... :D ;) Hai na daikho zara mairi best friend bhi Kolkata ki aur favorite actor SRK ki team bhi KKR, mujhy issi liye bohut pasand hai yeh team, hhehehe... Larki khabardar jo mujhy Mohina bola tou, main bohut kaam kerti hoon acha, haha... ;) :p Love you doll with a big and tight hug for my sweety, love you... :-* :-*

Cracresta, Hahaha thank you dear and stay blessed... :)

Here is the next chapter please enjoy and please do review... :)

England…

Nottingham…

AD Vila…

After reaching at home, Aryaan directly made his way inside his room while Daya in silence just kept looking him going inside and sighing heavily, he sat on the chair placed in their home's lawn… Taking deep breath, Daya took out his mobile and dialed a number… The call got attended in 2nd or 3rd bell…

Callee silently: Aani kaisa hai…?

Daya sighing heavily: Bohut roya hai aaj… Pata nahin Sunil, aaj ka din mujhy uss din sy bhi zada mushkil aur takleefdeh lagta hai jb main ny Abhi aur unn sb ko chora tha…

Sunil caringly: Kyun k uss din baat tumhari thi Daya jb k aaj baat Aani ki hai aur main janta hun k Aani ki takleef tum brdasht nahin ker sakty…

Daya in low tone: Mujhy tumhien sorry bolna tha yar… Main kal bohut rash…

Sunil cutting him in warn tone: Phone band ker dun kya…?

Daya smiled and: Haan ker doo…

Sunil angrily: Nahin karon ga, kya ker lo gy tum…?

Daya smilingly: Baatien…

Sunil smiled and softly: Daya main samjhta hun yar, aur main janta hun k tum Aani k liye bohut zada sensitive ho aur don't worry main Puneet ko samjha lun ga…

Daya becoming serious: Nahin ab uss ki koe zarort nahin hai oldie…

Sunil happily: Matlab tum Aani ko bhaij rahy ho yahan humary paas, Haryana…

Daya taking deep breath: Nahin…

Sunil angrily: Main bhi kahon suraj dakshin sy kaisy nikal aaya aaj, hunh…

Daya smiled and: Tum Puneet ko yahan bhaij rahy ho oldie…

Sunil narrowing his eye-brows: Main ny kb kaha easa…?

Daya calmly: Main ny jo keh dia tou bs done ho gaya… aur ab yeh batao k Puneet k papers kb khatam ho rahy hain…?

Sunil casually: Aik paper kal hai Saturday ko Electronics ka aur last next week, Tuesday ko hai Physics ka… Main uss ki flight confirm ker k tumhien bata dun ga…

Daya in smile: Thanks yar, main…

Sunil angrily: Daya please yar Aani maira bhi baita hai samjhy… Mujhy uss k mamly mein koe formality pasand nahin hai acha…

Daya: Acha bhae sorry, khush ho ab…?

Sunil softly: Aadha khush hun aur aadha kb hun ga tum janty ho yeh…

Daya taking a sigh: Main Aryaan ko daikhta hun aur ussy Puneet ka bhi batata hun, khayal rakhna apna…

Sunil sighing heavily: Tum bhi khayal rakhna, bye…

And they both cut the line and Daya remained sitting there for some more time and after composing himself well, stood up and moved towards Aryaan's room… Reaching in front of his room, taking a deep breath he knocked his room door and then entered inside…

Aryaan hurriedly while wiping his teary eyes: Dad aap… (placing the photo-frame having Jennie's photo back on table…) aaien na baithen please…

Daya silently sat on bed and Aryaan sat beside him silently with down head while scratching his left hand's thumb's nail with his right hand's thumb's nail…

Daya smoothly grabbed Aryaan's right hand and: Mairi baat hue hai abhi aap k uncle sy, Puneet k papers Tuesday ko khatam ho rahy hain uss k baad woh yahan aa jaye ga… (Placing hand on Aryaan's cheek and turning his face towards himself…) Kuch plan banaya hai kya k kahan kahan ghumao gy ussy, hmm…?

Aryaan looked him with teary eyes and silently just hid himself in his father's arms… Daya in sad smile just tightened the grip of his loving shell…

Aryaan in wet tone: Dad, thank you, thank you so very much…

Daya softly while rubbing his head: Ks baat ka thanks mairi jaan… Main ny aap ka plan kharab ker dia tha na tou yeh…

Aryaan cutting him while separating and grabbing his both hands, in low tone: Dad please I am not talking about all this…

Daya softly: So what are you talking about my dear…

Aryaan tightening his grip on his father's hands: Not to allow anyone to enter in yours life after Mamma's demise…

Daya looked him for some moments and just pulled him in a tight hug: Aryaan, you are my life baita… And after having you there is no space in my life for any other person dear… (separating from hug and cupping his face…) and to be true my soul there is no one who can replace Jennie's place in my life and heart, she is the only woman whom I loved, love and will love till my last breath… (kissed his forehead and in smile…) after all she gave me the most beautiful and precious gift of my life, Aryaan…

Aryaan gave him a small smile and: Dad you still misses Mamma na…?

Daya looked him in pain and a tear silently fell from his eye which he hurriedly wiped off… Daya taking deep breath and while standing: Chalo aaj Jennie ka favorite dinner banana hai na, bahir aa jao jaldi sy mun dho k…

And he left his room in the same moment while Aryaan kept staring at the door for few moments and then relieving a sigh, went to get fresh and soon joined Daya inside the kitchen…

Aryaan taking spoon from Daya's hand: Dad aap rehny dien, I will do all this stove work… Aap Mamma ka favorite special Strawberry ice shake bana lien…

Daya smiled and: OK but pizza bhi main hi banao ga Aryaan, aap ny last time bohut kharab banaya tha…

Aryaan complainingly: Dad that was not my fault, the cheese was rotten and…

Daya cutting him calmly: Yeah Aryaan I know baita aap ka kabhi koe fault nahin hota, by the way I think stove is not listening yours instructions young man as I can smell the fish is burning…

Aryaan instantly turned his attention towards the stove and hurriedly turned the side of the fish and while clearing his throat: Umm Dad it is not burn, it is just a bit over-fried…

Daya said nothing just a small smile came on his lips while Aryaan silently snubbed himself in mind and in his thoughts SECRETLY he threw the fish inside the dustbin and started frying another one, thinking he did all without coming in notice of his Dad, who really helped him in doing all that SECRETLY… After having dinner they took coffee and then the two moved inside Aryaan's room after getting free from the kitchen…

Aryaan while laying; placed his head in Daya's lap and closed his eyes… Daya smiled and silently kept rubbing his fingers in Aryaan's head while resting his head on head-rest…

Aryaan with closed eyes: Dad…!

Daya looked him and: Hmm…?

Aryaan grabbing his free hand: You havn't destroyed our plan Dad because I never had any plan to go there leaving you here alone…

Daya smiled and kissed his temple softly: Just forget about all that dear and go to sleep as tomorrow you need to submit your project so you should have fresh and calm mind, right…?

Aryaan smilingly: My Dad can never be wrong, good night Dad…

Daya smiled and: Good night champ…

And taking deep breath, he too rested his head on head-rest still rubbing his free hand in Aryaan's head… He silently remembered the day when Aryaan was around five years old and after taking him back from Jennie's grave, Aryaan went inside his room and Daya went in his room to take a shower… After sometime he came out from the room to prepare dinner when heard low crying voices coming from Aryaan's room so instantly moved there and opening his room door saw him laying on bed while hugging his teddy-bear tightly…

Daya hurriedly moved towards him and sitting on his bed; just pulled Aryaan towards himself and really felt peak of pain seeing his completely red and wet face…

Daya instantly hold him in a tight hug and while rubbing his head: What happened baita, why are you crying…?

Aryaan hugged him with his full strength and started crying with loud voice… Daya was getting really panic, seeing Aryaan like that…

Daya trying to sooth him: Aryaan please baita tell me what happened… (stricking something in pain…) Are you missing your Mamma hmm…?

Aryaan nodded still crying in the tight hug of his father's secure shell… Daya in extreme pain just silently kept rubbing his head while holding him in hug… After some minutes, seeing him calmed down a bit, Daya separated him from hug and wiped his teary wet face and kissed his forehead softly…

Aryaan with teary eyes: Dad my all friends are having their Mammas… Why my Mamma left me, did she not like me…?

Daya cupping his face in pain: No my son, your Mamma really loves you a lot and she is still with us dear…

Aryaan instantly: Where is she Dad, I want to hug her please…

Daya looked him in extreme pain and just hugged him tightly: Aryaan your Mamma is in your heart baita, she is inside you and seeing you crying, she is feeling lots of pain at this moment dear…

Aryaan while separating in teary-angry tone: No, she is not feeling any pain otherwise she would be here but she does not care for me…

Daya in soft tone: Aryaan you know baita there is another world where angels live… There is a kid who was not having parents and the kid cries a lot so to console him, god has sent your Mamma there because…

Aryaan cutting him instantly: You always say that I am an angel, so why I am not there…?

Daya instantly hugged him tightly and: No Aryaan, never say this again… Those who go there can never return… (looking him while cupping his face…) Do you want to leave me here alone like your Mamma did hmm…?

Aryaan looking him innocently: But Dad I will take you with me na…

Daya looked him in pain and in sad smile: But I am not an angel Aryaan and only angels can go there that's why Jennie went there leaving you here with me…

Aryaan stared his face for some moments and: No Dad you are an angel but its good that god does not know this otherwise he will send you there too…

A tear fell from Daya's eye and he silently wrapped him tightly in his arms and while standing hold him in his lap and moved out from the room… Daya washed his face on basin and making him sit on kitchen slab…

Daya in smile: Aryaan now whenever we miss your Mamma we will not cry but will cook her favourite food, how's that idea…?

Aryaan happily: Great idea and by this she will not get any pain from us, right na…?

Daya hugged him tightly and kissed his head softly: Right my son and now promise me that you will not cry again…

Aryaan in small smile, still in hug: Promise…

Daya smiled and after separating from hug, gave him a soft kiss on his cheek and: So now I think we should cook dinner as I am feeling hungry and same as you right…

Aryaan nodded in small smile and Daya started making dinner and Aryaan was helping him in that as much as he could like giving him a spoon, placing the plate on table and many other small works and after having dinner and getting free from kitchen, they both went inside Aryaan's room…

Daya made Aryaan to sleep in his lap and when he confirmed that Aryaan was in deep sleep, he tried to move out when Aryaan in sleep hurriedly tightened his grip on Daya's hand while mumbling as: God he, my Dad… Na ly jao…

Daya in extreme pain just pulled him in his lap caringly and hid him in his arms while burring his face in his chest and supporting his head on his shoulder… Aryaan became relax in his sleep feeling his father's loving shell around him and a soothing smile crept on his lips… After that it became their tradition, whenever they missed Jennie, they cook her favorite food and whenever he found Aryaan disturbed, he slept with Aryaan…

Next morning, Daya woke up with the alarm sound and hurriedly turned off the alarm and looked towards Aryaan, who got bit disturbed with that sound so Daya hurriedly placed hand on his head and pressed his head softly while tightening his grip on Aryaan's hand… After few moments, seeing Aryaan again drifting in sound sleep, Daya became relax and waiting for few more minutes, he smoothly took his hand out from Aryaan's grip and while cupping Aryaan's head from back side, with extreme care he placed his head on pillow while slipping from there… He placed his hand on Aryaan's forehead and grabbed his hand too, seeing him getting disturbed again… After some time seeing him sleeping peacefully, he moved out from his room while spreading hand on his head and giving a soft kiss on his forehead…

Daya went inside his own room and after getting fresh, he started doing his office work as it was five of the morning so he was having two hours to complete his work… He was very much busy in his work, when his room door got knocked and Aryaan came inside… Daya seeing him there; looked at the clock which was stricking 07:30…

Aryaan in smile: Good morning Dad aur ab jaldi sy aa jaien breakfast is ready…

Daya nodded in smile and moved to wash his face again after patting his cheek while Aryaan got busy in arranging Daya's things… Soon they both were present on dining chair where…

Aryaan while applying jam on toast: Dad aap kb uthy…?

Daya while taking juice: Around 05:00…

Aryaan looking him sternly: Aap ny jogging ki kya aaj…?

Daya clearing his throat: I will go with you in the evening baita…

Aryaan angrily: It means today you will come back at night, right…?

Daya taking sigh: Aryaan I am having a very hectic day today yar… Having two meetings and then I need to visit the site so I could not take out time for jog today dear…

Aryaan gave him a tough look and then taking his mobile dialed Paul's number and after getting his full schedule of today, he ended the call with thanks…

Aryaan turning towards Daya: I am free in the morning so I will go to the site instead of you with Paul uncle and then you will come back with me in late noon and we will go for the jog in evening, its your new schedule made by your Boss…

Daya looked him with sweet lovable smile: So you are getting agreed to join the business, right…?

Aryaan while nodding: Yeah because I cannot take risk regarding yours health…

Daya smiled and: Aryaan, I need Paul with me in both the meetings dear… And I cannot allow you to go alone on the site because you know nothing about what we are doing there… (softly…) aap iss waqt apni studies py hi focus karo baita, main bilkul theek hun sirf aik din jog na kerny sy beemar nahin per jaon ga main…

Aryaan sternly: Dad this AIK DIN at least 3 to 4 times comes in every week…

Daya making a face: Com'on Aryaan now you are exaggerating yar…

Aryaan angrily: I am not, you are seriously very careless regarding your health Dad and tomorrow you are going with me to see yours doctor…

Daya annoyingly: Aryaan see…

Aryaan in cold tone: It's done Dad, now I don't think any further discussion is needed…

And he went inside to take tea for both while Daya looked him for few moments and jerking his head, in smile started reading the newspaper and soon Aryaan returned with their tea cups, after having them in causal talks, Daya went towards his enterprise and Aryaan got busy in his small zoo…

India…

Haryana…

Sunil's Home…

Tuesday evening, Sunil was sitting in his lawn while having a tea and reading a magazine when saw Puneet entering inside home in big smile… Puneet seeing him sitting in the lawn directly made his way towards him… A boy of whitish complexion, around 21 years old, with black hair and eyes, having 5.6" height, wearing black jeans with bark blue, full sleeved formal shirt whose sleeves were rolled upward...

Puneet happily while sitting besides Sunil's chair with thud: Oooh god Baba I can't tell you how much I am happy and relived, finally mairy papers khatam ho gaye ufff…

Sunil in smile: Yeh itni khushi papers khatam hony ki hai ya Avni ki qaid sy nikalny ki haan…?

Puneet naughtily: Thori si khushi papers khatam hony ki bhi hai Baba…

Sunil laughed lightly and: Aahista bolo aap ki Maa ny suun lia tou dono ki class lg jaye gi…

Puneet smiled and then while looking around: Baba, wasey Maa aur didi hain kahan…?

Sunil smilingly: Aap k papers khatam hoye hain na aaj tou aaj heavy tea ka arrangement ker rahi hain dono…

Puneet smiled and then taking his mobile out: Main jaldi sy Aani sy baat ker lun tb tk…

Sunil nodded and Puneet dialed Aryaan's number who attended the call on second or third bell…

Aryaan in smile: Happy freedom day Chen…

Puneet in light laugh: Haan sach mein bohut acha lg raha hai Maa k hathon sy zinda bach nikalny k baad…

Aryaan laughed and: Main bataon kya auntie ko yeh…?

Puneet in fake anger: Zindagi sy tang aa gaye ho kya tum…?

Aryaan smiled and: Yeh batao k flight kb ki hai tumhari, main ny sarey plans bana liye hain…

Puneet teasingly: Mairy sarey plans kharab ker k, hai na…

Aryaan in warn tone: Acha ab yeh apni fazool bk bk Dad k samny nahin kerna bilkul, samjhy…

Puneet taking sigh: I know yar… (taking deep breath…) Acha choro yeh sb aur haan Thursday ko aa raha hun main wahan aur achy sy suun lo mujhy ghar mein baithy rehny waley log zeher lagty hain samjhy…

Aryaan smilingly: Janta hun main yeh baat sir and that's why I had already chalked-out our recreational plans…

Puneet smilingly: That's cool… Acha chalo ab maira zada kharcha na karao aur rakho jaldi, pata hai na kitni expensive hai call…

Aryaan laughed loudly and: Chen I will kill you man seriously…

Puneet naughtily: Aaahaan now I got it, that's why you are calling me there but British law is really strict Aani…

Aryaan smiled and: Acha ab bye, maira Base ball match aa raha hai, tata…

Puneet angrily: You are so rude Aani, will teach a lesson to you soon hunh…

Aryaan naughtily: I don't take tuition from anyone except my Dad, bye…

And the line got cut by Aryaan while Puneet too removed the mobile from his ear with a small smile on his lips while nodding his head disappointingly…

Sunil in smile: Puneet packing ho gae kya aap ki sari…?

Puneet looking him: Baba, Maa ny tou mujhy books sy srr nahin uthany dia packing kb kerta… Aaj ker lun ga bl k didi sy hi request karon ga woh ker dien gi…

Sunil nodded and then again got busy with his newspaper while Puneet too grabbed a magazine from the table and soon Avni and Jiya also joined them there and they started taking tea…

Avni while forwarding his cup: Puneet paper kaisa hua aap ka baita…?

Puneet while grabbing it: Bohut zada acha ho gaya Maa… "A" grade hi aaye ga daikhna aap…

Avni nodded in smile and Jiya: Puneet aap ki packing ker di hai sari aik baar check ker laina aur kal mairy sath market bhi chalna…

Puneet in broad smile: Waow didi you are the best… (Jiya smiled while he continued…) main Baba sy bol raha tha k aap sy request karon ga aur aap ny pehly hi ker di…

Jiya while taking sip: Aap k paas packing ka time hi nahin hai Puneet… Thursday morning ki flight hai aap ki aur kal aap ko mairy sath market jana hai…

Puneet nodded and: Aani k liye kuch laina hai kya aap ny…?

Jiya nodded and: Hmm uncle ny tou dant daina hai k baiti ho k unn k liye gift kyun lia issi liye Aani k liye hi lainy hain kuch gifts aur aap ki packing kerty hoye bhi aik list banai hai unn cheezon ki jn ki aap ko wahan zarort per sakti hai tou sb kuch kal hi ho jaye ga…

Puneet nodded and turned towards Sunil and: Baba aap ny kuch bhaijna hai kya uncle k liye…?

Sunil taking deep breath: Mujhy ussy jo daina hai main woh mairy tareeky sy dy dun ga aap k sath kuch nahin bhijwana mujhy…

Puneet nodded understandably and they kept enjoying the tea in light chit-chat enjoying the cool breeze that was flowing around them and creating a beautiful aroma around them…

A/N…

Please yar don't forget to review, so that I can update the next chapter soon... :)

Love you and take care you all… :)


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