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The mad scientist from lab 1718 is a secret member of an evil organization, when angela escaped his plans of imitating Dr.Baker’s creation has vanished. After moths of research and many trials he created his own artificial life creation and named in Angelo-X, he is a perfect weapon atleast for the other people on Evil Agila Organization. death, hatred, and sorrow is what he want to bring in all the creatures at the land of dawn but Dr. josseff, the mad scientist, can’t see the perfection on his work.
The whole organization is using Angelo-X on their evil jobs, his mechanical heart is having pleasure while killing innocents, and his artificial brain continued to learn different things everyday.
Dr. Josseff is still researching to make the perfect warrior, he is informed about the strong warriors of Eruditio, the city of scholars, he know that angela will go there to seek for help. And because he is seeing Angelo-X as a trash and failure, he plans to destroy him by giving him a mission that will took his artificial life. “You can gain my trust if you bring me Angela’s body tied up on her own strings, Dead or Alive”. Angelo-X then accept the mission with happiness that he just learned that day.
Angelo-X arrived at Eruditio, he saw angela, but his mechanical heart beats faster than it should be. He dont have idea that it is love he is feeling at that moment.
What will happen next?
Is it possible for Angelo-X to fall inlove when he is programmed to bring sorrow?
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Your villain is so childish but im liking it, I am seing the connections between characters and places, this story has a very interesting synopsis, i wonder ehat will happen next
Pretty for a first time and looking forward to the next chapter. I found a few misspellings, grammatical errors, and capitalization; not story threatening but proofreading it again won't hurt. I find Dr. Joeseff's character kinda hilarious, I don't know maybe you've designed him like that, kinda villain from cartoon networks'. Oh, can't forget the X!! 😂😂 Do continue writing, not only on this story. With practice and patience, you'll be a good writer. Anyways, please check out and drop a review on my story "Bright Claw: Emergence" at 96th spot.
Your story is a gem! I like it. Please continue this. Your story seems like it has a lot of hidden events that will happen to the next chapters. Added to my library.
A good phasing and story flow. I like how you made each chapter interesting. All the characters was portrayed well in their individual roles. I like that Alpha and Beta. Nice execution of the story and those mini inserted information telling about the past is nice! Just fix the proper distribution of your chapters, confusing. Chapter 8 but the title says Chapter VII.