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Sam Sanderson is envied by many for his job, however he himself didn't seem to like it much.
Due to his expertise in nanotechnology he was tasked with monitoring the state the Valkyries, humanity's strongest weapons who all just happened to be made into gorgeous females.
Forbidden from even touching any of them, Sam spends his days in agony watching flowers he couldn't hope to touch. However one day all of that seemed to change.
His luck recieves a massive boost, but with it came new dangers, more responsibilities and conspiracies knocking on his door one after the other.
Finding himself diving head first into an inter-dimensional mess, Sam realizes that sleeping with robots was the least of his concerns.
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This book has top tier potential, amazing premis, good grammar, interesting protag and many more. I highly recommend this book.
Honestly trash. It’s a good concept, but the main character is a gross pervert, and the story was completely ruined for me when Nine (a love interest) started watching other’s have $*x.
interesting premise, the flow of the story is quite good too. i need more chapter to give my final review but for the time being it's good.
I liken it to Japanese mecha anime. It's going well for now. Let's see how it goes...
I have never understood the logic of writing in such detail the previous lovers of a girl or a guy, I am very confused by these proposals, you can't just say that the girl is experienced and so on... I have never understood the logic of writing in such detail the previous lovers of a girl or a guy, I am very confused by these suggestions, you can't just say that the girl is experienced and so on ... 3 stars purely because of the very cute robot girls...
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Have binge-read in 2 days till chapter 152 at the time of this review. If you are reading this then know that this novel is really good and you should just start reading it. But if you need more than just "it's really good", then here is why... At first, I thought that this is just a quick right hand exercise program. But I was wrong. And now I am so happy about it because now I have another interesting work of art to follow. So what you will get if you start reading this novel? ---->[img=coins]NO annoying cliches. While reading this I didn't have even a single "ugh" or "that's so stup!d" and no second-hand embarrassment. You won't be bang!ng your head against the wall and you don't need to turn off your brain and filter out all the inconsistencies. ---->[img=coins]If something doesn't make full sense, then that's how it's supposed to be. Then keep that in mind and see how the author unfolds the answer and the real truth to you. ---->[img=coins]Yes. It is a lemon novel but... that is not important- you will stay reading it for the real plot and story, not the mindless PLOT that is so easy to find everywhere and makes us dumber. ---->[img=coins]And talking about lemon scenes... they are ok. Not the best I have read but not the worst too. The author has some ways to make them even better and improve- but me being a real man of culture, I had no problems with it. None. ---->[img=coins]No fillers and no useless information. Everything you read is important and I never felt like Nomanalive (the author) was just writing for the word count. I don't recommend skipping any chapter or even one conversation. ---->[img=coins]The first few chapters of the story might seem slow, but it keeps taking up the pace and is fast and exciting now, and I think that the build-up at the start was perfectly paced. Should not be a problem even for someone with ADHD. ---->[img=coins]The characters don't feel like cardboard cutouts and even if there is not that much information and story development for everyone- each of them has their own role they are playing in the novel and they don't exist only because of the mc. ---->[img=coins]MC is not some shounen protag with super plot armor. He is not even a fighter at the moment and is a normal guy, except that he has become a really talented scientist because of his hard work and will from a determination he had from childhood. ---->[img=coins]The action is not boring nor seems too long. It's easy to read and imagine. I didn't want to skip any of them even if the ones fighting were cute girls and not MC. And even then- why should I skip cute girls fighting monsters? I am a man of culture. ---->[img=coins]World building... Nothing wrong with it. It's just Earth and places whose names are numbers. It's realistic fiction and not some medieval fantasy where you need to know all the power levels, and all the kingdoms or realms to get a sense of where MC is at the moment. ---->[img=coins]MC is not a beta, nor is indecisive. He is just normal and he has his reasons for everything he has done or does and they are understandable. As one who h@tes beta Japanese mc types- it's okay to read. ---->[img=coins]NO net0 rare. The author knows who is THE man in his story. BUT- There is one scene about Nine in the library where she sneaked and saw one couple doing something. If that somehow offends you then you are too soft. It's just something that helps the plot- because of that Nine will be more intimate with our MC and that is all. Don't whine about such a small detail. ---->[img=coins]The biggest minus is the updates. We need more chapters! And there are some typos and mistakes. But as a man of culture I have an inbuilt auto-correcter where I just slide past all of the typos or wrong words. Don't let some typos stop you from enjoying this novel. They are not that bad and not that annoying like some works from authors whose 1st language is not English. This is better. ---->[img=coins]The sentences and the flow of words and conversations are smooth and easy to read. Hope no one drops it and reviews it as tr@sh only because of some typos ignoring everything else that is good about this novel. Would want to watch this animated- that would be perfect. To Nomanalive- thanks for the hard work you have put into your story and I hope that you don't drop this novel and continue to improve your writing so that writing becomes like breathing for you and the right words and sentences flow in your mind like unstoppable rivers. AND please start using something like Gr@mmarly- it will take care of the typos.
honestly everything was good till I reached ch14.....i just can't read anymore of that chapter. i expected a cool headed mc. atleast not a perv,that's what I think the direction he's going in lookin at 'the experiment'. just please don't rush the story for lemons bruh. dropping it until I get convinced otherwise English is my second language so sorry for the grammar
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the story is definitely not the best, but it's good enough that it got me hooked. It have a good waifu, and you also want to know more about the world. so recommended.
Really good book Fights are great and lemons are great also And good plot 💯 would recommend
It''s on the same level as those award winning Hollywood movies (it gives vibes of a proper Apocalypse based movies with harem and other extra elements thrown in between). You Usually don't find such a intricate work on this Platform. Thanks for the your Hardwork, man
Like for likes Need likes and I am sure not the only one. Let’ Karma it up Book is a good read as well.
Quite interesting to be honest. I don't really have anything to complain about except some few typos and grammatical errors here and there, but hey... it didn't ruin the immersion for me so it's fine. Besides, I like where the story is going as of the latest chapter.
Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel. Premise amazing! Story? highly engaging! Action and battle scenes? Superb!! The Sauce?....beyond tasty. I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.
One of the best nsfw novels with a great world. The only criticism is that there isn't enough chapters.
The premise is really interesting. Cannot wait to see where this is going! The grammar and writing are also quite good. Thank you very much wordsmith!