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Capítulo 1: Chapter 1 - Heather

A ray of light was shining through the small gaps of window curtains. The light shone right at a sleeping man's face. It disrupted his rest and awoke him. "Wwaahhhh…" He yawned as he stretched his body. He then sat up on the bed. Revealing him to be in his mid-thirties, dark hair and light toned skin color. As he got up from his bed, his blanket slid down his entire body and revealed a muscular body. Not too muscular, an ideal muscle proportion. 

He got ready to begin his day. He washed up, wore proper clothing and started his day by going out. He exited his room, locked his door, walked down the hallway and waited for an elevator. He was living in an apartment. As he got down to the bottom floor, he walked towards his luxurious, black sedan. He drove out of his apartment complex and on his way. 

Whilst driving calmly down the road he received a notification from his cellphone. He looked at his cellphone and a name appeared on its screen, Heather. 'You have one voicemail.' An automated voice came out from his phone. He saw the name and smirked. He pushed the voicemail button on his phone, and it played the voicemail, "Hey, David. I-I just wanna tell you that, Uhm, my husband had left for his business trip. So, uh, yeah, just that. Goodbye." The playback ended and he turned his car around immediately. 

A few minutes after driving, he entered an elite housing complex. He was closing in at a large gateway to the housing complex. He rolled his car to a stop at a security checkpoint where he rolled his window down. "Good morning, sir. How can I help you today?" asked the security guard as he leaned down to get a closer look to who he assumed was a visitor. "Morning, I was invited here. Block XX, Number. 00." replied David to the security guard. The security guard then nodded and cleared the way for him to pass by. "Enjoy your visit, sir." saluted the security guard as David drove away from the security check. 

He then stopped at the driveway of a large house. He collected his phone where he put it on the passenger seat before, turned off the car and got off. He looked at the house before he stepped further. The house was a two-story house, with a large garden out front. In the garden there was a small path leading to the entrance of the house. David walked along the path and to the door of the house. He knocked on the door and a voice came from the speaker right next to the door, "Come in, it's unlocked." a female voice was heard from the speaker. Without further ado, David opened the door and in, he went. 

He was greeted by a large plastic flower in the middle of the room. The walls and floor of the room was made out of granite. Behind the large plastic flower was a doorway which David passed through. He entered the living room of the house, and it was majestic. There was a large sofa where tens of people could sit on it. The sofa surrounds an oval coffee table and a large tv behind it. In every corner of the room were decorative statues of a person. To the left of the house was a stairway leading to the second floor which David walked up. 

As he was on the second floor, there were a lot of doors to his left and railings to his right where he could look down to the first floor. He made his way towards a certain door as if he knew the house himself. Of course he does, he was here multiple times. He knocked on the certain door and the same female voice could be heard, "Come in.". He opened the door and saw a female in her mid-thirties, Heather. She was wearing casual clothes, glasses on and her hair tied in a ponytail style. 

"Hello David." Greeted Heather whilst she was sitting behind a desk with a computer on it. David didn't say anything and walked around the desk towards Heather. Their eyes locked deeply and as David was close enough to Heather, he grabbed her chin and slightly lifted her head and kissed her deeply. It wasn't a greeting kiss, yet it was a loving kiss. His tongue slither around inside her mouth and Heather herself enjoyed his kiss. She closed her eyes and welcomed his kiss wholeheartedly; she too slithered her tongue around in his mouth. 

The aura was getting more heated, and David reached his arm in her shirt to her breast. "Hmm." moaned Heather when David groped her breast whilst still in her bra. He kissed her more violently by sucking her tongue. She was also getting in the mood to go further but she stopped when he tried to reach down between her legs. She pushed David off, "Not now David, I'm still working on something." Said Heather as she pointed at her PC screen. David thought she was lying, he thought she was playing hard to get, but as he looked at the screen, she was indeed working on something. "Alright." Said David as she patted the back of her head, "I'll be in the kitchen, I haven't had breakfast." He said while smiling and heather nodded at him. He then left her alone to finish her work.

In the kitchen, David was making his breakfast. He knew his way around the Kitchen as if it was his own. He knew the house so well; he could close his eyes and roam freely without hitting anything. He knew Heather for a couple of years now, Heather was his customer in his business. In addition, he was also the person she confides to. They got close overtime but got intimate when Heather's husband had begun distancing himself from her. They barely talk with each other, sleep with each other, greet each other, nor care about each other. 

David and Heather became very close when Heather found his husband was cheating on her. During that time, Heather had invited David to a high-end bar to confide to. They drank and drank. However, David drank slowly because he was listening to what she had to confide, while Heather drank heavily. She had almost a bottle all by herself. She revealed that her husband cheated on her and how distant they were but couldn't afford a divorce. David asked why, but she ignored his question and changed the topic. 

Late at night, Heather was heavily drunk, and David was forced to drive her home. When they reached the house David carried Heather in and up her bedroom, HER bedroom. He placed Heather down and as he was about to leave Heather held on to his hand. "Stay." a single word came out of her mouth. "Ma'am, I drank as well and if I stay…" David tried to warn her, but she ignored his words and pulled him. He fell on top of her and Heather was the one who crossed the line. 

She kissed him and how shocked he was. Yes, he wanted to sleep with her. Who could hold back a voluptuous woman in her thirties that takes care of her body very well. Breasts that are round, firm and jiggly, ass that bounces with every step she takes and hips so slender that water could smoothly drip down beautifully. 

She continued kissing him violently, every nook and cranny of his mouth wasn't left untouched by her tongue. She stopped the kiss, and David was still startled by her actions. He just stared at her blankly while she smiled at her, "Why the long face, David?" she asked, but David didn't answer her. He was about to but afraid he would stutter. "I thought you wanted this body." said Heather as she started to unbutton her shirt slowly and erotically. "Ho-how do you-" David was about to ask her something, but she cut him off in the middle of it, "How do I know?" She asked, and David nodded whilst looking at both of her hands undoing her buttons. Her breasts-covered-bra were fully in his full view. She continued to undo her last button, and she opened her shirt apart. 

Her upper body was now revealed before him. This was his first time seeing her body naked. Well, not fully, yet. David was drawn in by her perfect breasts that he unconsciously grabbed her breast. "This is what you wanted right?" She asked him again. David smacked his lips and asked her, "Yeah, but how-" David was cut off again by her. "The moment I hired you. You were looking at my body lewdly." She explained to him. "Now that I'm like this, are you gonna stop…" she gave him a choice and it made David nervous to choose. "Or are you gonna continue?" she continued and at the end of the question David suddenly struck her mouth violently. 

She openly accepted him, and he kissed her the same way she did to him. David repaid the favor by not leaving any nook and cranny of her mouth with his tongue. This was David's first time embracing her like this and he let himself go wild. He grabbed both of her breasts roughly whilst kissing her and her moaning was halted by the kiss. He was so in heat, and she was as well. David then stopped the kiss and pulled down her bra intensely, a ripping sound was heard by both of them. Her breasts were now fully revealed with her nipple erect and hard. Without hesitation he sucked her nipple hard. "Ahhh…" She moaned while covering her mouth with her hand. 

She was so sensitive at the moment, when David sucked on her nipple she arched back. He didn't only suck on them, he nibbled on them as well and that made Heather moan more. David was in control, and as he nibbled on her nipple his hand reached down towards her skirt. He inserted his hand into her skirt and started touching her vagina through her panties. Only for a while he was touching her, and he stopped his actions. He stopped nibbling on her nipple, and he stopped touching her vagina through her panties. "You're soaking." He said and she blushed. He didn't know why she blushed, but he found it funny that she, owner of a multi-billionaire company, had a soft side. Because every time they met, she was quite direct and barely soft towards David. 

David laughed a little and Heather felt a little irritated by it. "What are you laughing about?" She asked him in a sharp tone, but David didn't find it serious and just laughed again, "No, it's nothing. It's just that I didn't know you have a soft side within you." David told her with a smirk on his face and Heather felt embarrassed. Her soft side made David wanna do her now, but he wants to take it slow. Therefore, he began touching her again and let out a small moan. He continued to caress her vagina through her panties. She was wiggling around feeling the sensation of her pussy, being caressed. "Wait, stop for a moment." She said as she was trying to pull his hand out of her skirt, but he was stronger than her. 

She couldn't stop him. She was coming to an orgasm and David knew she was closing in. She pressed on her pussy harder and started to caress faster. "Ahhh.. David, I-I'm cumming!" She shouted out and the moment she shouted out, David teased her nipple by pinching it hard. It gave her more stimulation and, in an instant, she let out her orgasm. She screamed whilst her body wiggled around. 

She panted heavily when she stopped cumming. She was seeing butterflies from the after effect of her orgasm. She thought he would stop for a moment, but she thought wrong. All of the sudden, while she still wasn't in her right mind, David was already on top of her face with his dick out. He grabbed her head by gripping on her hair, "What are you-" as she was about to ask something, David did what Heather would never think of. He immediately struck his dick into his mouth and started fucking her mouth. She was surprised by his actions. She thought David was just a lousy man who wouldn't do this kind of stuff. 

He fucked her mouth so rough that she kept on gagging on it. Her eyes began to be teary and every time she was able to free herself to catch a breath David would try force his dick back into her mouth forcefully. Weirdly, David thought to himself, despite him being rough she didn't even try to stop him at all. He started to think that she likes it rough and that was what made David to be rough towards her. He fucked her mouth for a few minutes, and he was close to cumming. He didn't want to finish in her mouth so before he pulled out, he pushed his dick all the way down her throat. Even though she tried pushing his hips back, it was to no avail, he was stronger than her. 

"Hhhaaaaa…" Heather grasped for air as David pulled his dick out. David slightly sat on her stomach as she was gasping for air and coughing. He could feel her belly inflating and deflating, her breast going up and down. Seeing she had grasped enough air, he got off her and stood by her feet. He then held onto her skirt and pulled it down forcefully. It tore her skirt apart and she was once again startled by his actions. After she was free of her torn skirt, proceeded to her panties and he as well pulled it down with force.

Her pussy was now in his view, but she was embarrassed. She crossed her legs in an attempt to cover her pussy, but David wanted otherwise. He grabbed her inner thighs and tried to pull them apart. She was fighting back when David was pulling her legs open "Don't you think it's too late to cover them up?" David asked her sinisterly and Heather only looked at her. She was a little confused about whether to continue or not. Even though she was the one who initiated it by making the first move. So, Heather brightly obliged, and she spread her legs widely. 

Once again, her pussy was in full view in front of David, but this time it was very clear. David smiled at her after she spread her legs open for him. Heather knew the smile was a sort of appreciation, however, she was embarrassed with him after she wrongfully thought about him. She covered her face with her hands, and she could hear David's giggle. All of the sudden, she felt an electrifying feeling. When she uncovered her face, she saw David was face deep between her thighs and she started to realize what he was doing. He was licking her pussy whilst fingering her. It gave off a strong stimulation and Heather moaned loudly and couldn't stop wiggling around from the sensation she was given off.

"David. Put it in." She asked suddenly. David was a bit flustered by her request as well. David knew he was rough, but he wanted Heather to feel good as well, that's why he was caressing her. "Better prepare yourself. Once I start, I might not be able to stop." Said David as he pulled Heather by her legs to the edge of the bed. He then spread her legs as wide as she could, he spat on his fingers and rubbed her pussy with them. Feeling she was ready, he positioned himself for penetration and in one strong push, all the way it went in. "Aaahhh… Fuck!" Moaned and cursed Heather, feeling his dick inside of her deeply. 

David was groaning when his dick was like being massaged by the insides of her pussy. "You're tight, Ma'am!" Said David as he began to move slowly. "Heather." She said, but it wasn't clear to David's ears due her moanings and the sloppy sounds her pussy was making. "What?" David asked as he laid down on top of her for a better hearing. "Call me Heather." She replied. Hearing this David smiled happily. "Yes, Heather." David called her name. He then started to fuck her roughly whilst silencing her moans with kisses.

 "You're daydreaming?" Heather's voice can be heard from behind David. He was sitting by a countertop, his steaming breakfast was in front of him and a spoon in his right hand, yet he didn't touch his food. He was indeed daydreaming. "Huh?" He said as turned around to see Heather walking towards him. "Were you daydreaming?" She asked again and Sat next to David. "Ohh. Yeah, I was." He replied, accompanied with a nod. He scooped his breakfast and ate it. He then took another scoop and fed her some, which she willingly accepted. "So, what were you daydreaming about?" She asked him whilst tilting her head on the countertop to get his attention. David looked at her smiling in wonder. He shook his head, ignoring her and continued eating his breakfast. "C'mon. Tell me." She insisted, as she nudged his body. "Why do you wanna know?" He asked with his mouth full of food. "Because… every time you daydream, it's always about what you are going to do to me. In bed." She said as she got closer to land a kiss on his cheek. David laughed it off and made Heather really wonder what he was daydreaming about. 

"I was daydreaming about the day when we first did it." Explained David, but his explanation was short. It didn't make sense to Heather. Her expression says it all. "Remember, the first time we had sex?" Asked David and Heather nodded, "It was nighttime right? And in the morning when you were making breakfast, naked, we did it again." Explained David and this time Heather understood why he was daydreaming. She remembered that day very well. She passed out on the countertop. "Why? Your face has gotten red." said David as he looked at her closely with a grin on his face. Indeed, Heather was blushing. She didn't expect she could pass out from multiple orgasms. "Nothing. Anyway, are you here to just have breakfast or…?" She asked. She knew what his answer would be. David didn't say anything, he dropped his spoon and held her hand firmly. He walked out of the kitchen, through the living room and approached a door. He opened the door, to be outside her house. It was her backyard; she had a pool and a lot of trees acting as a wall surrounding her backyard.

Near them, there were chaise lounge chairs. David stopped near one of them and started kissing Heather violently. "Aahh… Out here? Mhmm." Asked Heather whilst groping David's dick. "Yes. This is also what I was daydreaming about earlier." David explained as he kissed violently. "I wanna do you out in public." After saying that David without hesitation pushed Heather back and she immediately fell down on the chair. She was shocked but she laughed it off. She saw David taking his clothes off and she too started to undress herself. However, she was stopped by David when he all the sudden kissed roughly. Whilst kissing her, he undresses her top clothing, revealing her beautiful breasts encased in a red bra. He stopped for a moment, he stared at her body for a while and she called out to him, "David?" He snapped back to reality and said, "Sorry, I was stunned by your beauty. Ma'am" she then felt embarrassed, her face red as beetroot. "Told you to call me Ma'am" she said, whilst looking away. "And I told you not to be embarrassed." He said as well as he leaned close to her face, and he kissed her again. Whilst groping her breasts.

"David. I can't hold it anymore." She told him while he was kissing her. David stopped, he smiled, "You're always in a hurry." He teased her and she just smiled. David then stood up and undressed himself. When he was fully naked Heather's eyes were locked on his dick. "Instead of looking. Why don't you blow me?" Asked David as he stroked his dick gently. Heather obliged, she sat up and unhook her bra. Dropped down her bra and revealed her wonderful round and firm breasts. Her face then got closer to his dick, and she continued to stroke his dick for him. David held the back of her head, and this signaled Heather that he wants her to start blowing him. 

Slowly and gently, she started to suck, lick and nibble the head of his dick. Slowly David pushed his hips closer to her face. She knew his hand, at the back of her head, was to hold her still, for she tried to pull her head away but couldn't do so. Again, slowly and gently she sucked his dick deeper to where it touched the back of her throat. David felt too good that he began to ignore her humanity and started to treat her as an object. He held her with both of his hands and did all the work. He rocked his hips back and forth in haste and kept on hitting the back of her throat. It made her gagged and nauseous. But she enjoyed it. She enjoys this roughness. She began to spread her legs wide, and her hand reached down, slipping through her pants and her panties, and finally reached her vagina. There she began to touch herself; she didn't leave her breasts alone. She too was playing with her breasts, she pinches her nipples and twisting them as well. 

"Whaaa…" she let out a sound when David stopped fucking her mouth. He let her rest for a while before fucking her mouth again. "Warmed up enough?" Asked David as he grabbed her hair and tilted her head forcefully. Her eyes were red and teary, her mouth was drooling, and she was breathing rapidly. She looked at his sinister face and she nodded. He then roughly straightened her face to align with his dick and forced his dick in again. This time he didn't stop at the back of the throat, he pushed deeper to the point where she managed to tongue his balls. He fucked her so rough in the throat her saliva was everywhere, on the floor, his balls and her own body was showered with her own saliva. 

He felt enough fucking her throat, so he let go of her head and pushed her down the lounge chair. Thump. The sound when her voluptuous body hit the chair. She was wet with her saliva, even down her pants was soaked from it, in addition, with a little bit of cum from her pussy. He pulled down her pants along with her panties and her dripping pussy was wide open. This time she wasn't embarrassed showing him her pussy, unlike the first time they did it. Without any signs and hesitation, he inserted his middle finger into his pussy and a little moan came out of her mouth. He started to wiggle around his finger inside her, touching every nook and cranny of that dripping wet pussy. Feeling satisfied, he pulled out his finger, grabbed her legs and flipped her around with great strength. "Woah! Slow down David." She said whilst giggling. "Sorry, seeing your dripping wet pussy, I can't hold on anymore." Replied David with a smile on his face. 

Heather was lying belly down on the lounge chair. David grabbed her hips and lifted her up until her knees were at a right angle. "DAVID!" She shouted to her surprise by what he did. She was on all fours, knees bent over, and arms fully stretched out like a dog. However, David pushed her upper body down, "Ahh…" she groaned. "David, you're too-" before she could finish, David cut her off. "Sshh… all you need to do is be quiet and just enjoy it." He said near her ear and a loud slap could be heard along with a gasp, "Hah…". David spanked her ass so hard that it left his handprint on her ass cheek. "That stings." Cried Heather, but David ignored her cries and spanked her other ass cheek. Slap. Another one was heard, and another handprint was left on it. Slap. Slap. Slap. Another one was heard, and another, and another, and another handprint was left on it, and another, and another, and another

She covered her face in the sheets of the lounge chair. David knew she was weeping from the pain as she was also trembling. All of the sudden, she arched her back and screamed, "Aahhh… sh-shit!". Turns out, David, without feeling any sympathy, rammed his dick all the way in her pussy. As she arched back, he took this opportunity to grab her hair in one grasp and pulled it back, hard. Her head tilted up and he started to fuck her relentlessly. Sounds of his hips and her ass cheeks vocalizing as each humped was made into her. Her breasts jiggled back and forth. With each hump full of force the more her breasts swayed back and forth. David couldn't hold in the temptation of those beautiful breasts swaying around, as if they were calling on to him. 

David plunged his dick deep in her pussy and stopped there. So deep he felt like he had hit a wall at the end. "Fuck! David. Hmm…" She cried out as she felt the most electrifying feeling she had ever felt. David had reached her deepest part of her pussy. She was surprised, she didn't expect that David would be able to penetrate that deep. She grabbed on to his hip, she didn't know what she was trying to do. She grabbed his hip out of pure instinct. One hand on the lounge chair and the other on his hip. David then held her hand from his hip and pulled her up towards him. With his dick still deep inside of him, she felt like his dick was trying to gauge its way out through her belly as he pulled her up. "Mmm, David…" She called out to him which David ignored and began kissing her nape. One of his hands cupped around her neck and strangled her a little. His other hand groped her lovely rounded breast. "Heather, you are so gorgeous." Whispered David to her ear. 

He started to pull his dick out of her pussy and plunged it back in, "FUCK!" Heather cursed when David began to relentlessly fucking her pussy again. He fucked her while her body was straight up and with each plunge, his dick was scraping her pussy walls. Heather could feel his dick through her belly. Through her belly button to be precise. He fucked her so rough and rapid that she couldn't even moan. All she could do was just accept it. "David. I'm gonna cum! I'm gonna cum!" She shouted as he kept pounding her pussy. David could feel that she was close due to her pussy tightened up. So he squeezed her breasts and eventually pinched her nipple. He didn't just pinch, he twisted them as well. He gave Heather the most stimulation she could ever get, she could ever have. Then a splashing sound could be heard. Heather squirted, and quite a lot. She leaned her head back and rested on his shoulder. From there, he kissed her on the lips and played with her nipples. 

He let go of her and she fell down back to her previous position, knees bent and hands stretched out. David pulled his dick out and a small squirt came out the moment he pulled out. "Hehe, it's been a while since I saw you squirt like this, Heather." Sai David as he rubbed her pussy from down up to her asshole. She didn't say anything to him, she was too tired to even say a word. All she could do was breathe heavily. Her orgasms took a heavy toll on her. As he was rubbing her holes she layed down, flat on her belly.

She thought this was the end and he would end it there. However, she thought wrong, David inserted his thumb into her asshole. She was surprised and looked back at David. He gave her a sinister smile, and started to plunge his thumb deeper in her asshole. "You're tight. Heather." David told her as it meant something. She just stayed quiet, for that was all she could do at the moment. He pulled his thumb out and positioned himself on top of her. Her legs weren't spread so he spread her legs with his knees. She knew she going to fucked again and she prepared herself to 'welcome' him. She, herself, spread her legs wide and lifted her ass a little. She was now in a position similar to a frog. 

David kissed the back of her neck whilst complimenting her for willingly 'welcoming' him, "Good girl.". He then held his dick and rubbed against her pussy. He was getting those cum and squirt for lubricant. Feeling wet and slimy enough, he pointed his dick to her asshole and inserted his dick. Heather groaned. She felt a little bit of pain. She never had anal with her husband and had only tried a few times with David. So, this sensation was still a stranger to her. 

Fortunately for Heather, David went in slowly so she could get used to it first. Slowly and gently he gave her anal, and slowly her hole began to loosen, and slowly she began to feel pleasure from it. "How is it?" David asked her whilst he was still fucking her asshole gently. Heather replied with a nod and told him to do more, "Harder…" she said, but in a vague tone. David closes in on her, which led to his dick going deeper than before, but not all the way, yet. "I can't hear you." Said David in a teasing tone. Heather felt irritated as she knew he could hear her well but she also knew that David wanted to hear her say it out loud, in a clear tone. "Harder…" Said Heather again in a vague tone, but a bit louder than before. "I still can't hear you." Teased David more. It made Heather snapped and she shouted, "FUCK ME HARD, DAVID!". Hearing this meant David was given the green light and began to fuck asshole roughly

She was still sensitive from the previous orgasms, that each pounding he gave her, a little squirt of cum came out from her pussy. Even though she asked to be fucked hard, David didn't fuck her asshole as hard as he fucked her pussy. He knew Heather was super sensitive in the asshole, for he ever done her before and she fainted from the overwhelming stimulation. The sensation and tightness of her asshole was very different from her pussy. It was better and tighter. David was coming to a close. So he wrapped his arm around her neck and slipped his hand to her breast to play with and rapid fucking her rough. Heather couldn't moan because David was literally strangling her. She didn't mind this action because she liked it as well. A final and deep plunge was all it needed for David to cum. He shot it deep in her asshole. His shot was so strong and warm Heather could feel the warmth. 

A few moments later, David was lying beside her and Heather was lying in the same position as before. David's cum was flowing out of her asshole as she laid there, looking lifeless. David turned his head and looked at her. Coincidentally she was facing David. He saw her sweaty face, glistening from the sunlight, reflected by her sweat, resting. He turned sideways to her. He slowly reached his arm out to her face and gently stroked her cheek. Heather felt the gentle stroke and opened her eyes to be greeted with a loving smile by David. She replied with a smile as well. "How do you feel?" Asked David as he cleared any hair that was covering her face. She smiled and said, "It felt amazing, especially the… anal.". David laughed and she too laughed along with him. Then they rest and sunbathe by the pool.

A few hours later, by the entrance of the house. David was seen in his outfit and Heather in her formal clothing. Heather gave David a caring kiss on his lips and waved goodbye to him. David was leaving the house for he had other matters to attend to before he met Heather. He got into his car and left the premises. Whilst on his way to his workplace he got a notification on his cellphone. He looked at it and it displayed '1 Photo'. Fortunately he was in a red light so he touched the '1 Photo' on his phone and it showed Heather. She was wearing lingerie, a magenta colored lingerie. The lingerie was too small for Heather's voluptuous body that squeezes every part of her body. Her breasts were squeezed by the bra's lingerie that looked like it was sunk into her breasts. Her lower body part looked like it wasn't even covered, The panty was just a stirp of rope. It was small as well. It was so small that the rope that covered her pussy was swallowed by her pussy. Lastly there was a caption under the picture. David read it out loud, "The next time you come by let me know. I'll wear it for you. Especially for you." He smiled reading the caption.


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