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When our dear mc meets god, the only thing he could think of, was that God should not see his embarrassing life, especially not his fetishes.
Follow along Gol D Lorean, as he adventures the high seas!
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I suck at summaries, if y'all like one piece Id advise that you look at it, the mc will be op, but not by much, at least at the begining. No harem, a little romance, above average intelligence mc also can be expected!
Even if mc is dumb, the author shall use his supreme ability to give PLOT credit for his smart deductions!! ?
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Quite annoying.. Like I read 10+ Chp Still has Not know What MC Power Or what he can do.. What I know Just Profile Profile again... The hell Atleast Just give a hint bro.. Boring.
Imma be honest with you it's good but not good it's bad but not too bad it's just confusing asf cause the chapters lack information it lacks INFORMATION AND BACKGROUND I understand about the devil fruit and **** but the bounties just in the hundreds of thousands what is this like one piece but the low budget edition cause if you beat doflamingo one of the seven warlords and just get a 600k bounty why don't you just kill yourself ha. The story is good but you lack information and background creativity
From the very beginning I chose two ****ty abilities, which is already annoying, they also did not normally explain how these ****ty abilities work From the very beginning I chose two ****ty abilities, which is already annoying, they also did not normally explain how these ****ty abilities work
What a disappointment... I don’t know One Piece so I was just here for the novel but ehhh... Let’s start. Writing quality is good, there’s not a lot of mistakes. Stability of updates for me sucks but meh... Story starts great and I don’t mean the meeting with god as that was stupid af. I mean the time at the island with his parents and the escape. But after...wtf? Ok kid is being train but why is he calling his teacher Senpai? It should be sensei if you want to use Japanese words at least learn the meaning. Then he meets a fat guy that he trusts the moment he sees and the author tried to make the meeting funny just to destroy the settings in the novel that he made before by killing MCs mother and promising revenge. Then the story is just shiit mc changed to a idiot child ( he’s more than 30 btw) know one piece like the back of his hand but his family dies and author doesn’t even write about it. Then bla bla-bla-bla and a lot os stupid shiit. Mc OP? Fuk NO! He had one fight till chapter 70 and ... he lost. Not counting mobs. The story is jumping all over place and he just don’t care after as you don’t know what you read. Overall a total disappointment and waist of time.
The author here doing the shameless author thing! Hope y'all like my book, I would love constructive criticism so I can improve my writing and I hope y'all will be patient with me!!! Till the next time Sayonars desu!!
I just don't like the story Ahwhshdhhdhdhdhdhdjdjdjsksjsjsjskdkdmdkdmrmmdmdkdmdmdmsmmsmsmsmsksksksmsjsjsjsjsjdjxjxnxjxjdjdjdjxnznznsmmsmssmsmmsnsjsmssmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmskkamamamsmsmsmsmsmsmxmdmdmdmdmdmsmx
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The God he met must be a demi-God or a person who his apprentice of some drmi-God cuz the wish he granted are devil fruit and some technique. That is not a important, wat is proborn here is we don't know how his devil fruit work even after chapter 13. The hell kind of training he gone through which he say but he not even mastered haki only semi-mastered it in those 9 year training even though with the perk of supercomputing. And finally something made me drop this book the MC even after that much training he can't able to beat a some fat kid without panting for breath who was mc met in NORTH BLUE. I lost my curiosity and interest I had for this book now.
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