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Transformers Prime: I am Allspark
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The war between the Autobots and Decepticons transformed Cybertron from a planet of life to one decimated by war. Megatron, in his quest for freedom and equality, led his followers in a war against government corruption, a noble cause that slowly became an unstoppable quest for power that corrupted his soul. Orion Pax, a close friend of Megatron, even considered a brother, rejected the violent attitudes of the revolution, with his noble and predestined heart, received the Matrix of Leadership, becoming a true Prime, taking the nickname Optimus Prime, commander and leader of the Autobots. In the midst of the climactic battle, Optimus Prime, fearing that Megatron would use the power of the Allspark, an object of unlimited power, threw it into space to protect it from the evil intentions of the Decepticon leader. The Allspark wandered aimlessly through the universe, the object itself mysterious and emblematic, but the fact was that it held great power and the ability to bring life to any aspect, and its solitary destiny would be defined by an anomaly that would affect the future of this universe.
======================= AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story takes place in the Transformers Prime Universe, the rights to the work and characters belong exclusively to their creators, this is merely an entertainment story with no intention to offend or criticize.
======================= AUTHOR'S NOTE: The story will contain, among other things, violence and adult content. Mainly, the story will have significant changes as the story progresses, with extra characters in the work to proliferate the entertainment.
Ps: I don't know if there is a similar story out there, but I will try to be original and entertaining.
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right. allspark fall on earth, primitive kid touch it and become allspark. why not. Time skip of 300 000 years and the guy still discover his powers, and has basically done nothing. That's too much for my suspension of disbelief to handle.
It looks interesting and has potential, but for the 12 chapters, the Mc just apear in like 3 or 4 chapters for a few paragraphs while the rest is just showing his little intereferences in the original story (that in the end, didn't really changed anything) You can se the Mc as a little Easter egg in the story, he will appear sometimes and do something funny for half a chapter
massive dissapointment mc barely seems involved in the story and he's human. idk why author thought yk transformer prime fic as an human with the allspark majorly dissapointing for me wouldn't read or recommend.
Still one of the greatest dissapointment why give him an autospark and he's not an cybertronian. an human with an ice gun[img=Mad]
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Get rid of this book or rewrite the touch to three or so parts instead of being idiotic and add 22 or so parts im literally skipping it because most people know the backstory of Optimus prime and megatron but in case they don’t then three parts minimum to tell it
it's a good concept but poorly executed. the MC is a little bit*h. he has unlimited power and thousands of years of time but is seriously weak. what did he do in all those years? laze around ? also why is he so easily flustered? did he get no action in those thousands of years. all in all this is a disapopointment.
the only reason it has a rating above two is because Of update stability and world background other than that the Story is plain bad. its bad in a way that is simply unexplainable. the mc is useless in every aspect he's not even the allspark as he's just a rando human with no special powers per say cause bro has been running amd tunning from the race he created. its super annoying i wouldn't have guven this low rating but the arachnid chapter is just plain disgusting in this context.
The story was at a good pace at the beginning, then it went downhill with each chapter, the MC barely appeared and then it simply started with a flashback that lasted like 10 chapters that practically tells a transformation movie.
This is awful and don't feel like wasting my time to criticise on an review the author doesn't look at
literally, the filer is going to be more than the actual story soon. and the mc is barely in the actual story itself that if you watched the show itself, it's basically a 1 to 1 in all the archne part.
don't even bother .......the main story is shorter than the side story like by 2 times I have a feeling that the side story is infact another novel
i love the original part of the story but afterwards it becomes the touch and i hate that it doesnt have any use reading that crap. if you want to write a story about the backstory of Transformers go ahead but then dont give us false hope with the first arc
bro just stop with the flashback you made it long 47 chapter with only flashback at this rate you will have to delete the 1 to 40 chapter and make the original transformers animation.
bruhhhhhhh one arc has more chapters than all the previous ones combined, AND ITS STILL ONGOING, at this point i forgot about the F*CKING MC because of how long it's been just for a back story arc
When the history was getting good the author decided to flood chapters with Cybertron flashbacks which weren't important to the fanfic plot, it's more than half of the chapters now and to worse the situation the author doesn't replies to our comments, it's disappointing.
an honest review of this novel: 1. MC has only come in I think 10 chapters, others then that the mc has not shown his presence. 2. Mc has lived as long as humanity itself but however he hasn't even used his powers(literally he is immortal and could become overpowered but never used his powers other then making some energon in the few starting chapters other then that he never and i mean it when i say never explode his powers. 3. other then the few chapters form mc pov. author hs only been telling others pov, i know but come one for 20 chapters it's been different povs. 4. dude has been posting the backstory of both optimus prime and Megatron, and it's alright sometimes to past the back story but dude for the last 15-20 chapter been posting the Transformers One movie (the animated on which tells the backstory of the prime and Megatron) 5. Mc is more of a human who has no powers(he has powers but he doesn't know what they are and what he can do because he never explored them) he is more like that one character that dies before the plot that's the kind of man the mc is (form the small amount of interaction we have had so far) I'll stell be reading this just to know where he is taking the story although i have no interest in the novel otherwise. ps if anyone know some good fanfiction do comment them please I am bored as f, I came back to this novel to write reviews because I had no other novel to read otherwise I do not give a f about writing a review.
FINALLY A GOOD TRANSFORMERS STORY IN HEOR I HOEP THE AUTHOR DOES NOT QUIT IN THE END LIKE ALL TRANSFORMERS STORIES IN HERE. THEIR NOT MANY TRANSFORMERS STORIES IN HERE THOSE ANYONE KNOWS ONE BETTER THAN THIS THEN TELL ME DOWN THANK YOU. WE NEED MORE TRANSFORMERS NOVEL IN HERE.