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Kite Andou lived his life completely and die without any regrets, though unfortunately for him, he needs to save worlds after meeting a certain system.
System: I'm The Worlds Saving System! Nice to meet you, Host! \^0^/
Kite: ......
'Did I read too much novels?'
After saving many worlds after, Kite felt that the villains seem to be suspicious...
Kite: What are you doing?
Villain: *acts innocent* Hm?
Kite: *looks suspiciously and started walking faster*
Villain: *follows*
Kite looked back angrily: You're following me!
Villain: *continue to act innocent and blinked at him cutely*
Kite faltered
Kite: System, the targets are acting weird...
System: *acts innocent and act cute*
Villain: *peeked from the corner* I'm here.
Kite: .....They're definitely after me! Help!
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Hello, the author is going to leave a super bias review here... *whisper* Enjoy reading and if possible, I would like to hear some of your opinions about it... That's all, bye. *shyly hides again*
Author. Thank you for your work but I am also sorry for distubing you. I was scanning at Noveltoon/Mangatoon and found your book there being uploaded by a person named "carma". Is this you or is this person or user a thief? Thank you
I am very excited to read this story. The idea is fantastic, and discovering new worlds and plots is very intriguing. The writer has potential, and I am eager to read and find out how the story develops.
I think the plot is a bit rushed. World building is a tiring process but it's necessary, especially for the quick transmigration plot like this one. Character design, it's not just about appearance but also personality and their quirks. You need to explain their background and behavior clearly. There's many errors in writing. Maybe use a line or "****" to separate between characters point of view or different set in the story. overall, it's a little hard to read and enjoy. sorry.
The story about soulmates - the MC host and the ML villain, who will meet in every world. It is little bit cliche story, because villain is almost every time pitiful sacrifice, crazy man who wants to destroy the world and MC ...a light in his tragic life. It is not boring, it is story for those who like this kind of story
Nice** I enjoyed the story. Quick transmigration have always been fun to read and this is one of the good ones. The only problem I have with the book is the locked chapters at 20 chapters. This is an original not a Qidan translation. Is it a new scheme of Webnovel or the authors personal choice.
The novel isn't one of the best out there it's just okay. I had a few problems with the novel though. 1.There were a lot of grammatical errors, I'll really suggest that you'd get a proofreader 2. You kept jumping from one plot to another, I couldn't keep up and I even got confused cause I kept wondering how I got to that part of the plot or where the plot popped out from 3. Some scenes were not properly fleshed out and you failed to give proper information for important plot points. Like the scene where 2 kids were kidnapped, after they were kidnapped where did Louis take them to, what did he do them? And how was Louis able to easily get to frid base and destroy the machine when it was labelled as dangerous, at least some casualties must have been suffered. 4. I also felt that you should have talked a bit more about their childhood instead of instantly time skipping them to when they were 18. I really wished to see more interactions between Mikael and Louis
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I just started to read this novel, not finished yet though. So far I'm enjoying it. I love how you design kite! I will continue to read to find out more to see what will happen next!
Ok So I have only read a few chaps and so far it is interesting. You should proofread the chapters and correct the grammatical mistakes, mostly the use of present and past tense together. And tbh, I didn't laugh when you tried to joke (You tried to add comedy, or is it just me?) But so far, it was good and your synopsis is also interesting. That said, this genre is not a cup of my tea, but still, for those who like this genre, this book is recommended to you.
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Ding! ding! ding! System book alert! . . . This is an overall great read. ♥ ♥ The stability of updates is pretty impressive. And how the author did not quit on the story from two years ago, is definitely applaudable. ♥ I love the plot of the book. The troubles that the MC would go through to fulfill his mission is totally attractive to me. Thank you author, for drafting out your beautiful imagination into words. [img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=update]
Already in love with the book so much, as it's dragging me out of my reality, Can't wait to read it further about what happens next!!! Auther-Nim keep goinggg!! Fighting!!!! [img=recommend]
Very interesting and addicted novel! Good start and synopsis. The language that the author used is also entertaining. I love how the author describes the characters' interactions and thoughts. I am also intrigued by the novel's plot while reading it and can't wait to read more. Definitely, adding it to my collection. Good job, author!
This is such a unique premise! I love how the protagonist carries out missions for the system, and how the author builds upon this intriguing setup with fully fleshed out character development and humor! Tense when it needs to be, poignant, and lighthearted in turn, this is well worth your read!
An excellent novel with a gripping storyline, likeable cast of characters and a very responsive author who clearly cares about their audience. Excellent work.
Refreshing story for readers. Bit of entertaining and comedy, author is also great with narration. It's great, everyone should read this!!!
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's worth the read with a bowl of popcorn. Keep writing and keep up the good work, Author.
Wonderful work by the author. although I'm slightly disappointed that's it another system novel. It's part of the webnovel Genre at this point. Hopefully we can both grow as authors.
As a fellow author I will add this to my soon ever growing novel reading list. remember to keep updating the story to keep us interested. tip please put the system in brackets since they aren't the main character and it's less confusing.
The storyline is interesting and unique. So far the story is great and can reach great heights. The dialogues are realistic. The characters are very promising. The flow of the story is not so fast or not too slow. The writing style is on point and the choice of words is remarkable. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉